awsome story! not the best ending ever but it was still really awsome!good job!

Wow, that was an unexpected ending . . . very interesting:)
-Hannah

Intense. So was it a dream or did it all really happen? Wonderful story!

Thank God they got a lead on this idiot!

This man is a maniac! And What in the world did he do with Sara?

This guy is pure evil. There will a lot of rabbits pulled out of hats to get that kind of money. Good work.

I've always wanted Sara and Grissom to come clean about their feelings for one another. Be careful what you ask for, huh?

This guy is for real and very sick. Sounds like he may have killed his brother too. Yeah, there's my bad feeling coming back.

That's crazy how they got taken right under Brass's nose. Bet Brass will be in a sour mood. Just goes to show that a CSI's job is just as dangerous as police officers.

I've got a bad feeling about these kidnappers. On to the next chapter!

Whoa and I mean Whoa! The build up alone had me holding my breath! Talk about suspense! Great chapter. I hope that Grissom is okay.

Hell, I think that I'm going to have nightmares after reading about Grissom's dream.

Great start. I can't wait to see what Grissom has up his sleeve.

It was just a dream? Oh well, I really liked the story :-)
Evil Genius Girl

It was all a nightmare? Oh my, I *definitely* wasn't expecting that--nice plot twist at the end!

That was brillant. well done.
Becca

hehehe very awesome