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I have never before read a story that was so wrong . . . and yet so right at the same time. I don't care if it is OOC for Amanda, this story just WORKS! Good job!

OMG...that was AWESOME and if this is some of the dark areas of your mind then I like it...LOL...

THANKS:"D

Awesome, thanks. Even though it would never have happened, having just rewatched the series I chalk that up more to the mores of the 1980s than the character. If the series aired today, they would probably get much closer to this sort of scene. In any case, I enjoyed it.

Great story. I really loved the ending.

Fantastic story! well described and very convincing. I was smiling broadly all the way through. Lee deserved everything he got.

Please write more!

Whoa, whoa and double-whoa. You definitely have the gift of words and in addition, were able to put that together with a vivid imagination. The story strikes me as deviously, wickedly and deliciously sexy. I know, it is only R-rated, but the whole thing seemed to beckon to be taken the missing step further. It is a beautiful plot, you may find it implausible - well, it is AMANDA KING after all - however, an amazingly seductive scene. You could have had Lee had a more active part, even though you were quite suggestive in his unvoiced reactions toward the end, but it might have spoiled Amanda's complete control. I don't know if you specialize in short plots like this, but it would certainly work in a larger outline...if you have the opposite sex a little less baffled. That would have been my only critique. In addition, you make a great and honorable point at the end - again, even though, I pity Scarecrow to pieces! The title reads Chapter 1 - so, can we hope for more?

- Malena

Perfect! Bravo, bravo!

great story! Very Funny

ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! now I think I'm a little hot! you crafted an excellent peice here, Merel, but I agree with the others, sequel, please! "Lmppp meee luzzz"

totally unbelievable but way too funny. he deserved it. very nice job... (makes ya wonder though doesn't it?) ps... i'm still laughing! great job!

Great! I loved it. More More More

Your paragraph on what is sexy is one of the sweetest things I've ever read!

F*cking awesome.

you wicked, wicked girl! Loved it! you're right "our Amanda" would nver have done it espically the leaving without getting redressed, leaving Lee still tied up would serve him right sometimes though!

Loved the first time, second time, third time etc. You are my favorite. Now get busy on some sequels to a few other stories! Thanks for the great reading.