great story,loved!!

I really like your writing!

That story was great, although I WISH you could have added more, but o well... Oh yeah, you know earlier, when you said ideas just pop into you mind, well the same thing happened to me. I was just sittin on the compeauter reading a Blue Tears bebop fic and pickng my nose when it came to me! Roses are red Violets are not sure Vicous is cute, but Spike is just HOT... ^-^ Peace3 or V3, what ever the hell you wanna call it...

wonderful
just like the rest of your fics
xo

That was excellent. I think you captured Spike very well. He is complicated, but I can imagine thoughts like that going on in his mind. Anyway, I'm going to keep my dignity and not ask for another chapter (see that, I didn't 'specifically' ask :) ).

I just can't say enough just how much I enjoy your writing. You always have Faye and Spike in perfect characterization, which seems to be quite a fic. I hope you never stop writing S/F fics! :D

Quality quality- good job!
I love getting into Spike's head. Often when I read Spike POV fics (which I think are the hardest to write since he's so damn complicated) I get the feeling that the author has written him wrong somehow, but not the case with this story. Your spike is a good one, and so is your fic!

ok this is... I love it
but I'm working on something like that
I mean the-Faye-in-the-allay-part
mine has just a whole other twist in the story
grmphff
love to now if this is going to have a next chapter
o yeah one-shot guess not
I really need to stop doing things like this
well done anyway

Wah! I love you!! You are one of the maybe three authors on this site that can pull off this kind of fic without making it sappy. I love your writing style so much, your stuff is always fun to read, so I didn't mind that this was a one-shot insteaod of a chapter to Look me in the Eye (although I'd like one of them too!) since I knew it'd be worth the read.
Keep up the great CB work!