wow, i like this story, you definatly need to update it soon or face my wrath MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

~Uma =^-^=

hi! ^-^ i like this story and was hoping u would update! please! bye!

That.. was just plain cruel to leave off there! @_@ What happened?!? Argh... Continue quickly! ^.^ Btw, might want to re-read your stuff.. a few errors in it.. Maybe get a beta reader?
-VTL aka VTL77
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like this. that stupid Bra! will Veggie tell B? what'll be her reaction on that if she finds out? waiting...

interesting chapter, though, I think Veggie-head would be more protective of Bra and do more to her than just talk/yell for a moment, i think that he would punish her GREATLY, but this is just my opinion...good story, continue

is this a one-shot? or are you going to continue? If so, it is a really interesting story.

um... lesse.. *tries to think of constructive critisizm* Well, I guess all I can say is that Trunks is 7 years older then Bura minimum... so you can fix that and you mispelled Bura a few times... I think I'll stop here.

um... lesse.. *tries to think of constructive critisizm* Well, I guess all I can say is that Trunks is 7 years older then Bura minimum... so you can fix that and you mispelled Bura a few times... I think I'll stop here.

O_O Very VERY good idea.. ~why didnt't I think of that..~ Poor Vege-chan.. BAD BRA! lol Keep up the good work and get the next chapter out asap!
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