 Blackcat8610 2004-04-17 . chapter 1BC: Don't mind PLP... she's a dunce ^_^ *Get's thwacked with purse from nowhere* Nee, the walls have ears... anywho, it's a very interesting take you have on the whole thing, and I mean that in a good way! Not some polite way to say it's bad, cause it's good! There are some confussing parts, but from what you said, it might be because you took other chaps to make one chap. Try looking at it as a whole, read through again and make things clearer. a lot of things, like descriptions, is good. You can set the scene really well. I always thought Inu said wench, not wretch... not the point though. I like the notes that you add in, makes a serious part fun! and thanks for the button... have a shirt! *Hands over an "I lived through BC's review, AND LIVED!"* Shock, isn't it? |
 tigerjade 2004-04-13 . chapter 1It's a good start. Hey, you've got me wondering.
A bit confused, but I'm sure that confusion will clear up in future chapters.
All in all:
Update soon. It's good. Me want more.
Haha,
t.jade |
 Baka-Chan the original 2004-04-13 . chapter 1**mouth open, wipes eyes** I...I am confused! I-I don't understand whats going on... is Inuyasha Lee's big brother, is Lee a girl?? Yes she is okay well I dont understand. Is this a one shot or will you add more because I am confused...I am not sure that fanfics are suppose to be written like this, I am definitly confused, yes well...anywayz read my stories and reveiw please. Since I am the fist that reviewed :D. |