i like the story the way it is
but if you want to redo the story go for it
please e-mail me when you redo the story
animechick7645@

hurry up and update! can't wait for the next chappie!

good chapter!! I liked it, please update! I'm still baffled on about who it was...*thinks hard again* Buu? Babidi? Cell? Dabura? that'd be weird if it was dabura. lol. good job, keep up the good work

hm, interesting! I like it! I wonder who did that to Pan. *ponders a moment* Trunks? Uub? those are my guesses or even...*Dun Dun DUN!* Vegeta! Great chapter, sorry i didn't review the last one! ^_^ i'm out!

I need to know what happens next, I hope Bra comes & save her.

hm..interesting...none-the-less. kind of short, but oh well, continue!

AW !
IT IS SO CUTE I WISH MY FREIND WERE LIKE THAT SHE DOESN'T DO THAT KIND OF A THING BUT SOMTIMES !
ANYWAY PLZ UPDATE SOON !
I LIKE THE STORY !