This story is delightful. You handled the characters so well and I love your writing style. Very nice work.

That was a brilliant story i hope that you will make a sequal to this story i really liked the improvements to the Gravity Room

Oh boy...

Aaw... So cute !

YES !! ALL THOSE FRYING PAN OF DOOMS ARE GONE ! WOHO !

*cackles evilly*

KING YEMMA ! Get your ** down there this instant and alert the Saiyans of they are dealing with !

Uh oh...

Oh.My.God.
Gohan... RUN FOR COVER !

Goten looked at his father.

“Dad, why is there another KI in Videl’s body?” he asked innocently.

Trunks looked at Goten.

“Don’t tell me they did not talk to you about the birds and the bees!” he said in an earnest tone only an eight years old can manage.

Goten looked at his dad, even more confused.

“What have the birds and bees done to Videl, dad?”

Goku scratched the back of his head.

“Umm... heh heh... how to explain that?”

Vegeta groaned.

*laughs* I liked that scene !

Hm. Good point. I'm not sure when Bra was born. In DBZ, she and Pan seemed to be the same age, but in GT, Bra looked to be about fifteen while Pan was only nine. Huh.

i so love this story! i mean... *gaze dreamingly in the air* gohan and videl... mi fav couple in dbz! anyways, lovely!

I get what your saying about Gohan being a weakling in GT. It was kind of disapointing I've only seen some of it, But it was enough to see.

On the otherhand everyone expected him to be a scholar because thats what his mother wanted and a fighter because thats what his father wanted. Gohan being altogether to sensitive felt he had to do both, and then the Cell Games left him the most powerful on earth and fatherless. Whether or not someone said it, they all expected(except maybe Chi Chi) him to take his father place as protecter of the Earth.

So scholar, fighter and now protecter of the Earth. thats alot of pressure for some whose barely in their preteens. As much as I hate that they made him seem a weakling in GT. I kind of understand why. Gohan must have been relieved when Goku came back and became protector again.

Come to think of it maybe Gohan did want to be a scholar or a fighter. Maybe he might have wanted to be an artist of some kind. music, painting, sculpting, etc. I know Bulma asked him what he wanted to be when he grew up when she met him and he said Orthopedist ( not a foot doctor). I think that it was influenced more by all the studying he did and what his mother wanted rather that what he was actually interested in. Come on he was only five.




I thought Gohan couldn't/won't turn SSJ anymore. From what I come to understand through watching the show and from various sources. He...

A)Can't because the mystic magic spell(we'll call it)took that away when it was cast. as payment or something,

B)It's not necessary. Because he is so powerful and he doesn't have the fighting drive like his dad. Or...

C)His power level is so high that if he were to attempt SSJ, the transformation would be so powerful that it would destroy the planet he was on or atleast unstablize it.

I like it if I could hear back from you. If you got the time that is.

Bye

all i can say is, wow!

hahaha evil bad god thats hillareous hah picollo
pepsi bwahahahaha BWAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHA rEAD my StOry
of dbz plz