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You have to finish this one, you just left it hanging and now I just have to know what happens. Thanks

It is a really good story. It is interesting new... It is something different what makes it fun to read. But you should do an update of a new chapter because it has been a long time. And I think alot of people are waiting for it to continue.

Continue, I love your fic.
Continue please

I hate cliffhangers! Good chapter though. I hope you do update more often- your fic is fun. Keep up the good work.

I can't believe you stopped there!

those last three chapters were great! great great great! please update !

I like how Maria is so in tune to everybody- in the series she is definitely the most openly emotional of them; I just wish it didn't make her so weak- kind of goes against the whole Hurricane DeLuca thing. I really like how the princesses were sticking together. What happened that scared Liz so bad?!! The reunions were great, and I love how it was Max who wanted to know Liz's whereabouts. I can't wait to see their reunion and watch as they take down the "bad guys" :)

that was great! great great great great great great! but it was way way to short! so please write long chapters and please please please please update soon! please at least update once a week! that was great great great! please update soon!

What's wrong with Maria? What she just picking up on the turmoil Liz was in? They're waiting too long! Liz has already had to go up there! I can't believe you're leaving it like this! If I agree that it's evil, will you hurry up and post again soon? Now that I've more or less got the whole order of betrothals thing down, I'm curious as to what exactly the different powers are that everyone possesses. So far I know that the energy bolts are common for Michael, Isabel can still dreamwalk, Maria is an empath, and Max can make himself invisible. I'm not entirely sure about the others though. The only suggestion that I have for you is to watch your grammar and spelling a little bit more- you're doing a wonderful job with great characters and a fun plot. It would be a shame for it to be dragged down with poor spelling and grammar. This is a wonderful fairytale and I look forward to reading the rest, so keep up the great work!

Didn't really get why they needed new horses when you did such a great job of describing the horses they already had. An invisible Max- now that has potential. I loved the scene where he and Liz met up, and the accompanying feelings and responses. What a horrible plot! Coran deserves what's coming to him! I really like the Ventreans, although at first I thought you were saying that the others had been captured. I like the reactions to Max's status. Okay, so we've got Max dreaming about Liz, Alex about Isabel, and Kyle about Tess even though Max was betrothed to Tess and Kyle was betrothed to Liz and I think you said that Alex was betrothed to Maria which leaves Michael betrothed to Isabel (what a coinkidink :) ) Am I getting this right? So, why isn't Michael dreaming about Maria? I guess I'll have to read your next chapter to find out, huh? Darn :) Keep up the good work!

I love that the four princesses are all together and that they are all such good friends. I love who Liz's dreamman turns out to be, and how they already feel about each other. I didn't really get, Isabel's response, but when she warned Liz about what she'd better not do, it made more sense. I like that their captors don't know that they remember who they are- it could come in handy, and that they're being courted and using their in-the-show alien names. I like how good of friends the four guys are becoming, even though they're from opposing countries, and that they help Max with his guilt. I look forward to seeing what happens to who really attacked him. I liked the way the horses matched their owners, especially Max's. I'm still wondering who each of the princesses is supposed to marry (although I get the feeling they're going to do it their own way regardless of how it's set up so far). I like how Max thinks about Liz so easily. It was kind of fun having Michael notice and wondering what will come of it later. Keep up the fun work :)

What a fun beginning. It's all like a fairytale, which I think you were meaning to do. I really look forward to reading your next chapter. I hope that you go over just exactly who is betrothed to whom again though. I know that Alex is betrothed to Maria, but I'm really not entirely sure about anybody else.

NO! Don't stop now! More soon. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

great! great please update soon!