not bad! could flow better, but the wording/style is cool. (waves to Infamous One who read that insider issue.)

very nice piece-- i am glad you got this assignment because you did a great job!

Wow,now that was different and interesting!Bravo,this was well executed,and what an odd sense of timing...
Funny thing,there was an article in the newest SW Insider,about how people knew Star Wars better than Shakespear.When asked who said,"Now is the winter of our discontent" and "You don't know the power of the darkside".Everyone knew Darth Vader said the second line,hardly anyone knew the first one was from a Shakespearian play(much less the character who said it).

I love the rhythm and rhyme of your poem!

lol, sorry, couldn't help but laugh.
well done, but amusingly so...shakespeare and star wars-quite a novel combination.