it's nice...nice that he found someone.

O.O Sugoi! Wa~! This one is good! I like the description! I like how you described Matsumoto swimming. It is so fluid that I can imagine him doing it. >_>;; Anyways, I like how the story is brought out. It's understandable that he's a bit angry about the whole deal with Kubota and stuff; reminds me of how good friends drift apart and then move on--or something like that.
I like how Tachibana is written in this story :heart: I can't help but see him as the more calmer and gentler side of Kubota. >_< Which doesn't make any sense why the heck I got that idea.
Anyways, there's only one error in your work and that's the part where Matsumoto is surprised to see Tachibana near the pool, holding his hand. ("He mouth dropped opened in surprise." The 'He' in this sentence.) But over all the story is well written, nicely described and the characters has come out quite nicely too.
Wonderful work! Please keep it up!

Loved it! Very true to the series and I want more. Such an underappriciated fandom that you captured perfectly. Keep up the excellent work!

Loved it! As usually... :)

simply beautiful. way to go timmonsgray ^^
good to see you can write other characters/pairings equally well :)

AH...always love your WA or Araiso's stories and I like this couple alot and am glad you wrote abt them, not enuff ppk writes abt them.

Excellent story. I liked the slow unfolding of realisation.