I think it's pertty good. I believe in something like this happening in Astro City.

Maybe you'd re-publish this fanfic in Comics/Astro City? There are just two stories there right now. Two. For such a great universe. Not fair al all, don't you think?

An Astro City fic is a good treat.

Nice writing.

Aww! A whole bunch of fanfictiony goodness! :) Wow that was soo good! I'm so glad other people here like AC! Wow. PLEASE write more AC stuff like this! PLEASE!

Awesome! You should really write more, next time with a bunch of action! Maybe a huge team-up with all the heroes...stories about neglected heroes like Hanged Man...the continuation of Altar Boy?...(bunch of lightbulbs going off)...hm...

To tell you the truth I know nothing of Astro City and I only stumbled across this story on accident. But I'm glad I did. This story is wonderful. Keep writing more like it.

YEA! ASTRO CITY ficcage!
and this is brilliant. Santa Claus . . . I never thought of it but somehow, it fits right into Astro City. I really like the way you captured this woman without having to go into messy detail, and the idea that just one thing, one miraculous moment, can change years of grief and doubt.
And so, I love your fanfic, I'm incredibly happy to know I'm not the only AC fan in the fanfic world, and I wish you happy writing!

Ok, that was sappy.
I loved it.
Lovely lovely story that really wasn't sappy because it wasn't cliché.
Lovely.

Great little story- beautiful, moving, and to the point. It really captures the feeling of the series. I just wish there were more Astro City fan fic posted here. (What I would give to read a story about the Confessor!)

A little bit of Astro City magic. Thank you, Andraste.