   garsdal 2008-10-17 . chapter 28poor Gamabunta, he fel a noble death.
this has been a very intresting read, i am very glad i found the story. and beside that, i hope that you will update it soon |
 divinewolf16 2008-06-15 . chapter 28this story is probally the bet one i have ever had the pleasure to read. |
 aznrubio 2008-03-02 . chapter 28wheres the rest |
| aznrubio 2008-03-02 . chapter 26 i like it lol |
 swordbunny4486 2008-02-03 . chapter 26nice |
 diimmortal 2008-01-03 . chapter 28what wheres the rest, come on please put the rest up it 2 great to leave like that |
 The Sin of Existance 2007-12-17 . chapter 14Masahito WTF? It's Minato and Kushina. |
| JoshRand1982 2007-11-23 . chapter 28 nice story |
| Bobboky 2007-09-26 . chapter 28 sweet |
| Kain129 2007-09-19 . chapter 28 i love this story hope to get more to read soon |
 The Angel Serenity 2007-09-11 . chapter 19O.o... that is all good story thow! |
| davethedark 2007-09-04 . chapter 28 update update SOON |
 bobbetter 2007-09-02 . chapter 28DUDE WHAT THE HELL!?!?!? U NEED TO FINNISH THIS STORY!! OMFG!! x-x its.. so.. good.. *Sobs*... |
| shankstar89 2007-08-28 . chapter 28 hey interesting story. unique twist bu the way please update soon |
| GangstaJ 2007-07-13 . chapter 28 great story update soon |
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