cool story! I can't wait to read more of it. I understood about all the characters a lot more in this story. You explianed it very well.

This story is really interesting, and i hope you continue with it,,soon.

hey wassup this has a really interesting plot definately keep writing just one thing: u switched from present tence to past tense in the very beginning. LOL o well write more!! dont leave me hangin
becki