yaoi makes me sick,
you make me sick,
nuff said.
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r u gay or something?

*tears* You... killed GIPPAL! Gah... You'll die. *grabs a HUGE sword and starts walking to your house* MWAHAHAHA! But I had a feeling I wouldn't win. One of them were gonna die, but at least Gippal died saving his love! How romantic! Good job buddy! I so proud of you! Now get off your ** and write chapter 3! Must keep writing! ^o^

"...To feel his skin slide along mine, feel his lips on mine, his body clench around me as I - Oh." LoL, that was so totally awesome! Hilarious!Gah, lemme tell you. YOU have a deadline now! On both the next chapter to this piece of work, and chapter 3 to the other one! If you get those done quick, I promise on a Taco Bell quesadilla that I'll write chapter 4 with no hesitation! Anyways... NO, NOT MY POOR BARALAI! NOT THE SWORD! NOT HIS CHEST! But oh nice, boxers! *drool* Good job buddy! Cookies for you!

Wow... It's realy kinda creepy to think about Tidus having sex... uh, er, making love... with his quasi, diet-coke twin. *shudder* Shuyin's pretty hot, though. Gah... And boy oh boy, am I happy that Gippal's gonna be in it! I always knew you lurved me, skanky!! ^o^ And guess what? With all the downtime we'll have from testing, I'll definitely finish chapter 2! Promises! I just have this little problem to overcome where I have so much to include, but don't know where to start. OH WELL! BWAHAHAHA!
Continue please, my little friend!
Lotsa Lurves,
~ Kaitlyn ~

Gah... I'm so tired, skanky! I definitely slept for too long after I talked to you. This one's really sad! My poor Baralai! He seems lonely and sad and messed up as it is (of course, how else are you supposed to seem after being possessed a few times) but... Aw! He needs some lovin'! And where exaclty did Tidus come from! And why does Gippal have to be so easy! Questons, questions! Continue this one! I think you could make this one a lot more than just a one-shot!
~ Laters and much studying of Dnd ~
~Kaitlyn~