As simple as this was, I really enjoyed it. Not too long, not too short, just the right amount of words. Well done :)

Oh this is lovely. You are a wonderful writer Bast. I always enjoy your work so very much. Don't ever stop or become discouraged. Your words cut and caress, it's a gift. And with few words you paint an incredible scene.

EAACK! This seems SO good, but I need MORE of it, and it has been a while since you started... But PLEASE PLEASE write more?!
*Vivian*

No more? I mean good writing so far...seriously. But no more?? :O

"Apology is great writing. It is amazing how into a drabble, Bast writes a story which could almost be a novel. A great example of how this is done is the last sentence expreses the feeling of EVERYTHING changing for Roxie. Apology was more great work, typical for Bast.

Wow... pretty good. I would suggest more description, though.