I've just managed to grab the computer and read this :) Hun this is wonderful and it's just so good to have you back :D
mandy

Excellent job Anansay! I always love reading your stories. As far as constructive critisism goes...I only wish there was a Chapter 2. Thanks for posting your stories...you have a loyal fan base! See you on YTDAW.
Cheers,
Lena
(Agent_LAH)

Oh wow, Anansay...That was just...wonderful. You are one of my favorite authors and I'm glad to see you back with such an amazing story. It was extremely well-written with good dialogues and great insight into our favorite charachters. Great idea using the 'experiment' approach and letting Grissom make the second move. Definitely makes it more realistic. And of course I absolutely loved the ending. Made my day and I now have a huge smile on my face. *sigh* If only...
~Karin~

Nice to have you back Anansay. It's been a long, cold winter without you! :-) Well, you certainly haven't lost your touch! The story was as beautifully written as always. Yes, you are right--there is no way Griss will make the first move but yet, he *might* just make the second. I like how you write his hesitation, at first, but there is no way he can resist an *experiment*. So brilliant of you to think of that approach. And I like this confident, brave Sara but you still infuse her with such heartbreaking vulnerability that Grissom (and us readers) can't resist in the end. I was literally tearing up at the end. Nice to see Griss FINALLY listen to his heart rather than to his head. Thanks for restoring my faith yet again in these characters and their rightness for each other.

Yeah... finally! If only the show was this good! lol! Another nice story, Anansay!
JM

I really adored the dialogue and tentativeness of this fic. Ending was damn cute. So glad you're writing/posting again! :D

mmh! Wonderful! I simply loved this! I'm shaking...´and it's all your fault. Wish this could happen in the show sometime... Very good story, Anansay!

I was just thinking I hadn't seen a story from you lately. Beautiful!

Wow.. ahh.. how incredibly sweet. Grissom's POV/trepidation was described perfectly.

A wonderfully sweet fic from you has changed my mood for the day! I held my breath waiting to see what Grissom would do. Thrilled to see something new from you and as always, it was amazing. :)

Oh, how I've missed you... finding this fic alert in my mailbox made me smile. Reading it, made my day :D I love the way you manage to capture gris' essence so perfectly. His mind, his fears, his love, and that moment where his defences finally break down. Hope this means you're not leaving us again...

wow i love your story ^_^ you should write more

Great job. I think you've captured the persona of Grissom perfectly.

Yay Anansay! I hope this means that you're back! I was thrilled when I got the alert! This little ficlet made it all better! Thanks so much for sharing! It just goes to show that when you feel like giving up on something, it may be because you are aproaching it the wrong way. Maybe if you look at it differently or try something different it might work. Again thanks!
Suzy

Oh, I've missed your stories. This was a lovely vignette. You captured the swirling emotions beautifully.