just decided to re-read this story, and aside from a few spelling errors and a little too much Japanese for my taste (i recognized baka, and ningen, and thats about it out of all of the words), it was a good story. i hope you finally get around to posting a sequel to this story.

Nice, if there's a sequel to this, I'll read. If not, It was a good fic for me to read, ja ne.

cool love it

very cool

Good Work!

Love this.

Have to say I love all of your works, and this happens to be one of my favorites (mostly cause it's finished) ;)

i LOVEED THIS STORY

Great story,
keep up the good work.

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nice, usisng this as a bookmark

very good story

That was really good! I'm hoping for a second!

i love this! very interesting concept here!

Brilliant Story!!
Hope you write a sequal!!

I remember when you first posted this on XZ I read the first part, and discarded the rest because I didn't know the cross. That being said I feel ashamed that it has taken me so long to read this concidering how much I enjoy all your other stories.

This may not be your best work (that honnor goes to Family Matters because I feel I know the characters even though I have no experience with the cross) it is still very enjoyable, and I hope to see a sequal come from this some day.