 Farla 2004-04-15 . chapter 1Why exactly is it that whenever OTs have pokemon, they either completely lack personalities or they have a stubborn/cheeky/spunky personality which never actually effects the story but is just the subject of dialogue when the reader first meets them? There are other personalities that exist in the world, you know.
Do you know what 'sarcastically' means? Because no matter how one tries to interpret “You should learn to come when you’re called- for a pokemon, you are seriously way too stubborn, |
 ReLeeS 2004-04-15 . chapter 1Definitely a nice start, I like this so far. ^_^ Hope you continue on with the way you're going now, it'll be a really good story by then. Hope you update soon, I'm curious as to what happens next! ^_^
Becka-) |