I liked the chpater, it showed Sasuke's emotions and what he felt :)

uh.. I got a bit confused at the end.

OH GODD! You're gonna kill me..

The chapter was somehow heart-warming and sad..

Oh my God, I have tears in my eyes..

I just love your story, the chapter was great

That monster is .. terrible. Can't wait to see the moment Sakura and Sasuke meet!

He has to come back!

oh God, the story is great! I love the plot and Sasuke's personality :)

Great!

Excelent start, can't wait to read more :)

It's supposed to be a compliment; all those reviews. Hmm. Sakura. She's weak and vulnerable and fragile and weak and... she is in character.

You did do a lot of thinking by your choice of word right? I'm afraid that I might put an emphasis on the wrong word, hence, leads to a fallacy in understanding the plot. *frowns* ... ahem... Fangirl mode: OMG! It's Orochimaru! * squeals*

"He was wrong… Love can't be death… because real love doesn't die… so long as we remember and treasure it, it will always live…" Again, I disagree. You don't need memory to keep a bond. You don't need memory to feel an attachment to someone. (Well in this case, the memory of to love and to be loved) But, seriously, good job! I was getting frustrated with how the story is going -it's getting more and more predictable by chapter- but you gain my interest back by sharing your insight on the concept of familiarity and belongings. :D

Ah, I can sense it. The disagreement. It's coming. I know it's coming.