So...sad...I really like your stories. You deserve every review that you get, and even some that you don't. Keep writing and update as often as possible!

Oh, I love your stories. _ Especially 'cause they're SasuSaku. Yeaah. _
LOL, that whole bit about going out and finding fragments reminded me so much of Inuyasha. Strange..
Anyway, I think you've gotten off to a great start. It's a pretty original plot [I've never seen another fic like it], and I just love it!

O that was good. Please keep going.

Hey, this is getting better good.
Please continue

o0o0o0 what a good plot please continue as soon as possible this story is really good i like it a lot because of the plot! please continue this is really really intresting!

You did a great job on the first chapter. Naruto was very IC, and I could definetly see everyone reacting that way. In the preview though, Sakura seemed helpless. I know you said it was a little OOC, but the biggest piece of her personality is her strength. They made such a huge deal of it in the show especially in Gaara's battle a couple of weeks ago. Your style of writing is very good, and enjoyable, but I can't get past the fact that she just stood there crying. I don't think she would ever do that. She'd either be mad and get Naruto, or try to stop him herself. Even if she had given up on him romantically, someone with that kind of strength would never allow themselves to just stop and cry, or to use tears as a weapon. Shes just too proud. eh! I'm sorry, I guess I'm starting to seriously ramble. Gomen. ) I was just trying to think of ways you could make her more IC. I'm sorry I don't mean to be a hassle. I'm looking forward to the rest of your fic though!