I don't have enough time to read this whole thing tonight, but I'd really like to come back to it (and I don't know how to use that bookmark thing). It looks really good, though, and I can't wait to finish reading! :)

This was one of the most heartbreaking stories I've ever read. It's fantastic and the writing is just incredible.

omg i love it! TT TT

ohmygod i love it! omg (sob) poor haku

Really, I love your writing. Even though I'm completely unable to accept these bittersweet endings, I still really admire the philosophical insight into their relationship. Truthfully, I never expected it to draw me in so deeply because it just seemed so dark and eerie (and if Sasuke had no chance, I just thought it was hopeless to continue and feel my heart break); I found myself singing "You are my sunshine," afterwards though _''

It was beautiful. I don't think I'll ever forget it.

Thank you for sharing your writing

Beautifully written.

Sweet story. If only Sasuke in the show could be that good. In any case: that would make a good short story. I like the ending. It fits. :)

Oh dear...that made me cry...is this the end? Cause it's beautiful and sad...oh gosh well great job and good luck!

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony

Very interesting and cool. Great job and good luck.

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony

I'm crying, I swear I am. I read your fanfiction before this too the one-shot inspired by the song. I was sad then I listened to that song and I just cried more. This was so sad. I loved it, thank you so much for writing it.

OH! EPIC READING MATERIAL! Haha, while I was reading, I could imagine the whole thing playing out in my head - I love your style of writing. It's really captivating!

Also, I understand what you said in the previous chapter about how it would not end like most SasuSaku fics do - it was sort of a bittersweet ending which made it all the more believable. If you had made it too mushy after all the angst and what-not, I don't think people would have been completely satisfied.

Course, this coming from a total SasuSaku fan here, I am a bit sad, ya know *sniff* but hey, it was a brilliant ending and fitted so well with the original character's personalities. I don't think at any point did you make the characters too 'OC'. They match their manga counterparts perfectly!

*sniff* Now I'm kinda depressed it's all over though _ Not fair! I can imagine this being a movie, that would be really interesting, because you've written it in such a style that it could be translated to some sort of animation or live-act etc etc. Which would be really cool if some rabid fan made it... do you reckon you'd allow your story to be used like that?

Okay now... maybe I'm rambling on a bit much, but I really LOVE your story! I will be looking forward to other fics from you!

Love xox

Nice. I hope he doesn't die in the end. :)

I think this has got to be the most wonderful supernatural story out here...

]

S...So pretty.

..So...so VERY pretty.

And I adored it and loved and glomped and just cried.

Beautiful.

love,

me.

topic/42300/4679105/1/

This is a link to forum where a review for your fic, Between the Shadow and the Soul, has been posted. I'd appreciate if you could check it out.

Regards,

Shiranui