Why you're not continue over this story? Yeah, it makes me feel want to know, why Cloud is around at Esthar? At least, leave this story with a lot of answers, not questions, because others will never stop from wondering over this fanfic, but way to go for you.

i'm estimating that it took you a year to update .. i've waited for your update for so long ..

i began to think that you've forgotten already ..

you did change chapter2 ..
it's much sweeter ... ¤

oh well, i hope that you'd update sooner ..

Lil Bro,

Apparently, I can't review a chapter twice if I signed in. So it's me, just to let you know. I like the story! I'm glad you're continuing with it! I was afraid you'd stop and I wouldn't get closure. You know I like closure.

I'd like to know why Cloud is there...hmm...I like Cloud. He's cool. But why is he there...? Keep working ** this! I look forward to reading more! :D

Take Care,
Big Sis

why is it taking you so long to update a new chapter...?

it's been almost 4 months since you last posted your last chapter...

please update soon...

we'll be waiting... :)

now i don't normally like crossovers, but i like this one.
you have a winner here for sure. you just need to keep at it. i like it, i really do like it.

Cool chapter, a few typos but thats the only thing i could find wrong with it, and we all get typos, i really enjoyed reading it (im a sucker for Squinoa action lol) Keep up the great work!

Hi!
Well, it's a little different from the first chapter, but it was still very entertaining to read. The character interactions were good and I liked how Irvine, Zell, and Squall laughed at Seifer during that whole escapade with Quistis. It's very much like a fairy tale. Keep up the good work! Stay positive!
Take Care,
Big Sis

nice, very very nice. really ll i can say right now. it has potential, alot of potential.

awesome first chapter dude(sorry i had to say dude once today lol) Pretty interesting plot, it drew me in from the beginning and im still drawn! im really looking forward to the next chapter.

good day!... i would like you to know that i'm getting excited to your next chapter... :)
i liked it...
i'm really looking forward about the squall and rinoa romance... i am really looking forward to it... :)
only my request is that, is please avoid sexual acts to your upcoming chapters... thank you... and please post your upcoming chapters because i'm really looking forward and very excited to the romance of squall and rinoa... :)
keep up the work!
take care and godbless!
mwahugz...

i like it! it is better than my first story, keep it up

i enjoy the story.. please continue!
keep up the good work.

Hi Lil' Bro!
Cool beans, I'm the first to review! Well, what can I say? You've finally written a story and I'm very proud of you. I'm glad to have finally reached you, hehehe. For someone who hates English, you've done a great job with portraying your thoughts into words.
First of all, for your first story, it's done pretty well. Good characters, interesting plot, Squinoa action. Well, kind of. It'll get there, I know it will. I look forward to the Squinoa action.
I feel bad for Rinoa, her parents didn't make it in this story. ;_; But at least she has the others! But I like the Quistis x Seifer action, too. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
If you need anything at all, don't hesistate to ask!
Take Care,
Your Big Sis :D