   Rakusu 2007-10-20 . chapter 1kya, I love it already |
 .EverLastingFun. 2006-12-20 . chapter 5plz Update Soon! Why hadn't u update 4 so long? Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz (U get the idea)update! |
 SuicidalBeyblader 2006-03-20 . chapter 5i luv this story!! please update and make another chapter soon! |
 Karst 2005-11-03 . chapter 5 Argh! You are torturing me! Why can't you continue write??!?!
Aah!! I want to know what happends next! Please!! Hurry up whit the next chapter! |
| xZero84x 2005-06-20 . chapter 5 yoo,awesome chapter update soon |
| Lil - Turtle 2005-04-20 . chapter 5 great story
kaixmariam are a great couple |
| Midnightmare 2005-03-17 . chapter 5 Lemme guess, Ozuma wants er for himself? I like the story, ut it would help if you wer to update sooner if you could. Keep the story going. |
| Mariam88 2005-02-03 . chapter 5 Keep righting! I am one your biggest fan! But, no matter what...KEEP THE PAIRING OF Mariam&Kai! That pairing is the best pairing of the past, present, and futer of anywhere! Thanx=P |
| wounded-raven 2005-01-27 . chapter 3 Thatwas really good, don't take to long on a chappie ok. |
| surfer chick 2005-01-27 . chapter 2 That was totaly neckar dude |
| wounded-raven 2005-01-27 . chapter 1 col!! |
| some person 2004-11-11 . chapter 5 YAY! Another exellent chapter! heh,perphaps in the next chap while Kai and Mariam have another one of their meetings, they cold be found out by both the Bladebreakers and the Saint Shields!aand, you cuold make Max and Ozuma jealous!!It'll make your story drag on, but it'll be cool!!WWHE!Yeah! So you could make 3 guys be after Mariam' heart!But, we all know she'll end up with Kai anyway.UPDATE! |
| tari-chan 2004-10-01 . chapter 5 very sweet chapter. Loved it. Keep up the good work and plz make it Ozuma/Mariam/Kai pairing it's more interesting that way. Here's an idea; say there is a school dance coming up. Mariam wants to go with Kai; Ozuma wants to go with Mariam. Um... At the dance she's crowned Queen and has to pick who she wants to be her King; Kai or Ozuma. (drums) What do ya think? Hope it works. {and the one Mariam doesn't pick will give her the silent treatment and she can't handle the silent treatment}. Of course these are only ideas. |
 FalconDance 2004-09-16 . chapter 5Good story... |
| My secret angel 2004-09-03 . chapter 5 :'( Poor Mariam! Will Tyson, Rei, and Max find out? Then it will be poor Kai! UPDATE ASAP! |
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