Very good! I loved the descriptions, and the way he was literally battling with himself. Good job! :)

Great story, loved it. Very well-written!

Thank you! Thank you for existing and make the horrible Mary Sues stop... you didn't write a Mary Sue, did you? *goes check* Goodie, all safe then.
Great story. I love Mort, but I love his conscience even more. Really, great little piece, you should write more.

Cool I like it :-)!

Wow,loved it.Very accurate on his mind thinking.Great job.

my my my, I haven't read such a good Secret Window fic till I clicked on this story. Bravo! Very well written, a different style too. I like it so much that I must urge you to write more. I got my eyes on you kid. *adds to alert list* Keep up the splendid work!

nice. good job. do more!

That shouldn't be a PG, it's got swearing in it.