When i started reading this i was't sure what to expect, beyond good old-fashioned m/l fluff, but i got hooked before finishing the first chapter. Your Max & Logan are more prone to introspection and inner dialogue that i'm used to find here on FFN, and i'm LOVING it :)
I'm really hoping you'll update soon.

update pretty please! What's up with the seizures? Is it the implants like how they got really bad in "Haven"? Come on...i'll give ya a cake *hands u a cake* there now update *innocent smile*
we need all the Max/logan shippiness we can get these days with everyone trying to hook her up with Alec and all. Oh great work btw..been meaning to review every chapter but i'm lazy so great job!!

Did you forget promising to update if you got reviews? Did you forget promising to update 'fairly regularly' ?
Please don't give up on this one, it's too good.
I need to know if Sebastien will be able to help them.

Thank you to keep writing!

That was unexpected... The quick kiss on the mouth...
JG

Is the cause of seizures is because of the implant now?
I think this story is great and keep on with the story.

Hey,

Naughty author! Leaving at such a cliffhanger! I sure hope Sebastian has the answer!

I can't remember if I reviewed, this but it's great, cute, but not "gross cute" like too many heart eyed teddy bears or something *shudders*

I love the atmosphere between Max and Logan, and how Max is still kept in character even though she's sick. The banter between the pair is wonderful, very believable.

My fav line from chapter one:

But Max, having never considered herself ‘wise’ paid no attention to these warnings.

peace,
mystic

can u just plz continue, summers started and im looking for my max/logan fix

great story. anxious for more.

I dont know how I missed getting an update on this since I'm always griping about more 'Rock'

Well done, very emotional and very descriptive.
Few small typos, but looking forward to the next chap.

wow great story, can't wait for more!

I have been reading this story and keeping up with the updates. I want to know what happens next so bad. Please update soon.

I noted your post about the latest chapter on BBWW and thought I'd better start your story at the *beginning*... ;)

You introduced this piece as 'sappy M/L' and perhaps it is, but I'm enjoying it anyway! :D

I was initially startled that Logan was moving about *without* the wheelchair. Not sure where that puts this story in relation to S1 or if it's AU, but once I accepted that as part of the universe you'd established... :)

The seizures are an interesting problem to explore. As a catalyst to get our protagonists together, it makes sense. Their thoughts regarding one another are nicely established, and Max's discomfort and uncertainty upon waking was very natural.

Logan and Max flirting and then cuddling.

*Warm fuzzies*

Glad you decided to continue with this story despite a hiatus period. I look forward to catching up with the other chapters. :)

Cheers!
Mouse :)

I loved the chap, but I'll be sending some cold weather your way if we don't get updates in a more timely manner ;-)

No playing on the forums till your work is done!

Hey there! Just to let you know that just found this story of yours and I have to tell you that it is really good. Not read many Dark Angel stories till lately, but I have to say that I am glad that I started. Hope that you continue soon.