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Reviews For: The Lost
Rose1948 2007-09-27 . chapter 2
Another good story. *nods firmly*
Really Bad Fanfiction 2005-08-11 . chapter 2
Good story, but your second chapter doesn't end well. It should lead into the other one, or be conclusive.
Innortal 2005-08-10 . chapter 2
Very touching, and kept things at a high. Nice work.

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