A lot of this gave me Assassin's Creed vibes.

It's odd, since this story came out before Assassin's Creed, but...

Definitely a good story.

Sadly, it appears to be dead.

I don't know if your still reading reviews for this story, but please finish it! It's too good to be abandoned!

To bad your profile lists this story as abandoned, its a great piece of work.

The humour laced throughout the plot is great and helps keep the story from getting to dark and the references to the pokeverse in general are great with just enough original content added in. I read through the whole thing in one sitting and am sad to see that it will probably never get any closure.

6'0 and 118 pounds? I'm sorry, but that's beyond anorexia. A 6 ft woman weighing 118 pounds would die from malnutrition. Misty should weigh around 148 pounds.

Other than that, this is an excellent story.

I guess I've just encountered the perfect piece on 'Rocket Ash'...pleas, give us the ending, or I really think the anxiety will make me go mad!

Signing Off,

Ash the Aura Guardian

I was deely saddend when it ended i thunk u should make part 23

Dead story is dead...

A pity, because this is good stuff.

Excellent story. Can YOu please continue? I Am Waiting for the next part.

I'm extremely impressed. This is high quality stuff here. I got referred here, so I'm going to be heading through this. Great start!

update

Very deep plot. You don't find many stories with this many plot twists.

woah... i never thought pokemon could be done this way... very good

Please update this the story is just too great to pass up, please continue this great story I just love it too much to have a cliffhanger loomed over me ...:3

Dood I loved it

Ash working for Team Rocket, misty too it is a great idea I so want to read more ... :3

Wow... I like this story soo much! It combines the real world with the Pokemon world in a realistic way and it explains so much. This is the Pokemon world living along side our own. Please update soon