Really liked this story, it was funny. Might have been fun to have a sequel of some sort... See Kev and Jess again... and maybe let them accidentally in on the secret. :P

Cute! Very enjoyable! :-)

Good story. I liked the idea of Jack squirming while his old friends told stories about him, described his long hair, called him "Jackie", etc. I think there could have been a little more angst. The sentence about "the man they knew didn't have so many scars," was good, but I think it would have been even better if there had been some mention in the story about them SEEING the scars, and their first reactions to them.

Hey! This is really good! Funny and I liked the perspective you put it into.

It was really funny. Great story!

great story!

Fun. :)

Yep. it's funny.
clevver too.
:>

That was really funny! I like your humour, especially Jacks thoughts (well, this way of writing anyway)!

nice

Funny and sweet... The Colonel's thoughts were interesting to read and I hope you write more to this!

THIS WAS FUNNY!
I liked the
“I think ‘alive’ is the word you’re looking for. He looks actually alive for a change.

You do have a great imagination. It is a great short story. I challenge you to write more of them. :-)

Great.

Interesting fic I just luv how you made Jack in the past's personality seem so rebelious. That definitely sounds like Jack to me.
~FantasyChick