oh, this is awesome, please update soon

I LOVE IT!

Girl!! I swear you are a goddamn maniac and you're bringing Squall&Seifer with you! *sigh*
I'm only going to keep reding this because you are reviewing my fic and I want to know what direction you're gonna go in. I thought you crazy before...I really am starting to question your sanity Chickorita...
Hm...Maybe I should write a story like this...it's an idea. Whatcha think?
SG

Seifer and Squall? 0_o *cough,cough* I didn't know... I still like the fanfic though I detest the pairings you chose. But who am I to criticize? I'll just go on to the next chappie! ^_^

WOW! I thought he really was going to kill Rinoa! I mean the dream... >_<
I can't believe they're not together! I've always pictured them as a Squinoa forever! You will bring them back together again, right? *pitiful eyes*

Chickorita!!
You are so freaky! That wasn't as lemony as you made it seem. Don't go over the edge with it though. I know how you get!! :D
I like this chapter but you used Quistis for the 'act'! Man, you are evil!
I can't wait to see who is going to kill little innocent Rinny!
Update soon!

Haha, I love this chapter more then the first one. I actually think its more funny then suspenseful or anything (sorry if that offends you). But it's fun to read! And who IS that mysterious woman they experimented with? You've got me on the edge! You're definitely going on author alert! ;)

This fanfic has very good wording, which this certain author tends to use very nicely. Its already obvious that with a few more chapters it would be very interesting with lots of drama.
If I had to rate it I would give it a 4 out of 5, but it could use a little more work.

...you are fucking SICK.

OMFG!! I can't believe you put that at the end of your story!! You are so insane! How did I ever become involved with people as demented as you!...but it is so true! I knew you would continue it. You know you can always ask me for help anytime in school if you get stuck!
Continue this!
-ME

I like it. At first when I read the description, I didn't think it was going to be that great. But it's awesome! I love the angst. Update soon! ;)

Hey...I could never imagine MY Squally being so violent and cruel but I like him...hehehe. A one shot? hm. I really think you ought to continue this girl! Wanna see more definitely!
SquallsGIRL
P.S If you wanna know about MY story idea then contact me somehow. (its similar to this story)
Talk to you whenever,
ME ^-^

Muahahahahaha. I'm always first to review myself!! This was really good. One shot? Aw...well, I'm sure if people REVIEW you'll write more, right?
Me: Yes, I will.