Great.. Keep going since Max stomach got settled.. On with the show.
JG

Okay, I'm not gonna nag. If you could write - you would write.

Thank you anyway for the good story and who knows - your muse could come sneaking back. It happens.

Good Luck.

I really like your fic. Are u going to update soon?

Please update soon... exams are finished arent they?

Hope you had a Happy New Year and made a resolution to finish your stories.

Still checking everyday for new chapters.

hiya, it was my birthday today (5th) and finding this great story was a fab present, cant wait for more...maggieann452

Great M/L fluff in this chapter I loved it
Please update soon!

Wow, this story is awesome, you are the first author that I have read that was actually able to make a romance that still portrays Max and Logan within their realy character anf personality...
Katie

wow bout time... excellent job on this, it was hot, i really enjoyed it. looking forward to more..and soon, no more of those several month waits. alright, how about i promise to update my story in a timely fashion if you do the same...huh? yeah i know it'll never work...keep up the great work and update soon!

Great, great chapter. That should keep us all happy for a while. Just don't forget us.

a good story, a bit confusing though, jumping scenes. but overall, it was good

great story BabyAngel, keep it up :)

sure, why not? add a new character to the plot :)

Very good story, I liked the ending, Please Continue, personally I don't think it would matter if there was a black guy in Max's group, I like it when stories aren't exactly like the show.

hi! very nice story but too bad its not that good to me but fantastic to Halima. Anyway who the hell do you think you are not to come and pick me up from halima and khaleds house anyways thank God cause by the time you read this i would have finished swimming...

The cliffy thing worked. I do not think it matters if you throw in a black X5. Everyone invents their own reality when writing. Have you read some of the other writers? They invent things that are really out there sometimes. The story is good update soon.