I really like your story so please update soon and often!!

I must say, I have liked your story so far, however, it does have some areas where I feel it could be improved. First and foremost, I find it strange that in a world of magic with an evil wizard on the rise that no one would press Harry more on how he does and knows things. I mean Dumbledore keeps letting him get away with saying "I can't tell you right now." It seems like everyone is far too accepting. The next thing I notice could be just style, but it feels like there is a lot of room to expand on what you have written. It feels like you planned out the major plot points and just are moving from one to the next. There is nothing wrong with this but it makes the story feel rather impersonal and makes it harder to connect to the character (at least in my opinion). It also makes the story rush along faster. You have been doing a good job of keeping the scenes well paced, but overall it seems to be moving rather quickly. Anyway, I am liking your story, so keep up the good work (that is if you are still writing?)

Herald

you havent updated in 3 years :( please update soon! ^.^

Wow. This chapter was amazing.. by far the best yet.

I'm sad you never continued the story--it was going great! and could be close to a an ending--getting James and Lily together, maybe hint at something happening to Peter that would make him switch sides (a dark experience that happened right after Harry left?) and hopefully Medea going to the future with Harry. Anyways, I enjoyed what you DID write. Especially enjoyed how Harry doesn't let Dumbledore walk all over him.

I'm putting on my alert list in case you decide to pick it up again, even if it's been a few years!

i love this! it's really good, please continue!

Man, this is such a great story! I love it, are you going to continue?

I love these stories, and I know I'm gonna love this one!

please tell me why you stopped writing. this is a great story. i loved reading it. please please please finish it i dont think what i would do w/o an ending.

Okay...one rant coming up! You kept stating that reviews made you write faster...well you have a lot of reviews, but off hand I would say that 3 years isn't faster. So...if you have abandoned this fic in direct conflit to you statement that you would never do so, please have the courtesy to say so!

Is this story abandoned?

i fell off my chair laughing about the signs of a werewolf in human form, please continue, love this story so far

i hope u write more soon

is this story abandoned? it is really good, you should defenetly update. i love it!

Cool story. Hope you decide to update soon. It would definately be a shame if you abandoned it!