I think this is one of the most realistic conversations between Jack and Pete I have ever read. Thank you!

That was amazing writing.

Just found this story and I love it!

Wow...I really liked this. I loved a the little things that bugged Pete, Teal'C's humor (especially the bit about how the network must've been informed, b/c he was watching Tremors *g*), and the honest conversation at the end between Pete and Jack. If you were thinking about writing a sequel, I'd certainly like to read it!

-sil

I like. A lot. Even if it DOES have Pete in it. LOL It was very sweet, and at least Pete knows he won't win. *evil grin*
~( 8>

WONDERFUL! Oh, this was so incredibly sweet! The interraction between Jack and Sam... the way the others thought nothing of it... but to Pete they were GLARING signs!
And the way Jack didn't deny anything... I think I liked that the best.
Very well done!

Very, very, very good! In character, warmingly funny and sincere with the whole Jack-Pete converstaion at the end. You captured the interaction between the team perfectly. Welldone.

I was very impressed by this piece--the characters were very much in character. I loved the gifts given to Sam--Star Wars, from Teal'c, a vase from Jack...both brought up bits of previous episodes. I like that you didn't make Pete evil; he doesn't seem like a bad guy, and he is trying to get along with Sam's friends. I liked the interaction at the end between Jack and Pete, and how Jack had said that Pete passed. ;) It was a nice piece. :)

Good story

Oh...that's a very in-character fan fic!! I really liked it!!
Good writing!
~ Fi

I laughed so hard I had a coughing fit when Teal'c was talking about Tremors being cancelled - a brilliant line!
The whole thing was well written and had a feel-good ending, in a way.

That was great.

Great story! I like how you had Pete acknowledgeing that Jack was the right one for Sam. And there was so much great humour! Especially about that part about Teal'c and the cancelled tv show. Great stuff =D

I enjoyed this. Loved the scene at the end and the last line. Thanks.

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