WOW ! I was totally into the story... You wrote the story beautifully in a dark way... hehe... but shouldn't you give 'ANGST' warning for it though ?

I'm kinda confused about Kagome n Naraku's feeling for each other...

O_O killed me with the evanescence quotes but IT WAS wunderbar!

Loved it, loved it, loved it! I really would have liked to know what went wrong with her wish though!

I do enjoy a good Nar/Kags fic. This was one.

love it

wow. this story disturbed me... yet in a good way. it was dark and twisted but thats how good Kagome/Naraku fanfics are supposed to be. Kagomes transformation was written really good. I really enjoyed reading this. watching the battle for dominance, seeing the change in Kagome. it was just great. I would have never read a Kagome/Naraku fanfiction again, if i had not read yours first. you got me liking the pair. theres just something about the pairing thats great. Good job )

So dark ... yet so beautiful. It fit the song so very well, you were superb in the way you fit the lyrics into the story. I've never read a song fic quite this good. Love it

ILOVEILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT! .IT!

I'm surprised he didn't kill Souta...

Anyway, why'd he live in a house with white and pink shades? I just...can't imagine that :)

Your story was one of THE best NarKags I have ever read! I think you were a bit harsh on Kikyo, but not too much to become disturbing. I do hope you write more NarKag!

Thanks for the great read!

GOD DAMN! I always liked Naraku in a twisted sort of way, but I practically drooling now! I also liked Kagome's response to him and the fact that it's written in first person makes me feel exactly how she does (well, maybe a bit better...) :)

On to the next chappie!

Great work! I love a well written NarKag...especially one where Naraku isn't OOC. You managed to keep his dark character and portray Kagome's inner transformation perfectly! It seems believable and the writing style's great.

ok...some of that was confusing; but I think I followed most of it. Good story in a sick kind of way as Naraku really can be Horror! Keep up the good work.

OMG! I loved this story so much! It was rather masacisitc but I like the twist you put into it. I'm definately going to recomend this to all my friends. Atleast, the ones who won't be freaked out by it. I hope you write more like this!

that was good

O.O I have a shirt that says 'out of my mind-be back in 5 minutes'. I think I should give it to Kagome, ne?

Amazing story.