wow. this story disturbed me... yet in a good way. it was dark and twisted but thats how good Kagome/Naraku fanfics are supposed to be. Kagomes transformation was written really good. I really enjoyed reading this. watching the battle for dominance, seeing the change in Kagome. it was just great. I would have never read a Kagome/Naraku fanfiction again, if i had not read yours first. you got me liking the pair. theres just something about the pairing thats great. Good job =)

So dark ... yet so beautiful. It fit the song so very well, you were superb in the way you fit the lyrics into the story. I've never read a song fic quite this good. Love it~

ILOVEILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!I.LOVE.IT!!

I'm surprised he didn't kill Souta...
Anyway, why'd he live in a house with white and pink shades? I just...can't imagine that :)
Your story was one of THE best NarKags I have ever read! I think you were a bit harsh on Kikyo, but not too much to become disturbing. I do hope you write more NarKag!
Thanks for the great read!

GOD DAMN! I always liked Naraku in a twisted sort of way, but I practically drooling now! I also liked Kagome's response to him and the fact that it's written in first person makes me feel exactly how she does (well, maybe a bit better...) :)
On to the next chappie!

Great work! I love a well written NarKag...especially one where Naraku isn't OOC. You managed to keep his dark character and portray Kagome's inner transformation perfectly! It seems believable and the writing style's great.

ok...some of that was confusing; but I think I followed most of it. Good story in a sick kind of way as Naraku really can be Horror! Keep up the good work.

OMG! I loved this story so much!! It was rather masacisitc but I like the twist you put into it. I'm definately going to recomend this to all my friends. Atleast, the ones who won't be freaked out by it. I hope you write more like this!!

that was good

O.O I have a shirt that says 'out of my mind-be back in 5 minutes'. I think I should give it to Kagome, ne?

Amazing story.

omg, that was so hot. i was so turned on. lmao. naraku is just so sexy in this. very well written. i love it.

GR It was fine all exept for nuraku coming bak and taking her and rapeing her agian Gr i need to hit somthing

Wow...this story really belongs in the anime! I mean when you read it its as if your reading it out of the anime script its very good!!

Oh, my gosh! This was a treasure to find. This fic I think really sums up the dynamics between Kagome and Narake in a relationship. It was also VERY creepy and twisted. (Just what all good Nar/Kag fics should have.)Also, Naraku's innuedos were quite...smexy. ;)

4 stars!

wow.