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guiltytexan 2004-04-25 . chapter 5
Ok, is it just me, or do you really hate Sara? O, well.
pucktofaerie 2004-04-24 . chapter 4
Hm...this is relatively funny for a short little fic...but your characters are a little OOC. Especially Catherine and Sara. The others I can see working, but I think it's more feasable that Sara would be in on the pranks. Keep up the great work and update soon!
Sweet Jorja 2004-04-24 . chapter 4
Wow that was so funny! I can't even say my favorite part because I like it all! great so far, keep going!
~Sweet Jorja
Evil Genius Girl 2004-04-22 . chapter 3
:-) this was really cute/funny/(random adjective meaning funny) especially "A well-timed call, made by Brass to Grissom, draws them both back to the break room of the lab where Catherine, Nick and Warrick, along with their techies, have the monitors set up."
Evil Genius Girl
ps are u going to write more on this story?
pucktofaerie 2004-04-21 . chapter 3
Hehe, funny. But why couldn't they tell Sara? Oh well, keep up the great work and update soon.
Charming-Storm 2004-04-21 . chapter 3
LOl, very funny that Nick is supposed to take care of Sara and Catherine of Grissom. LOL, funny story by the way :D
goldenone 2004-04-20 . chapter 2
Oh! Can't wait to see what you have in store for days! Post it son!
pucktofaerie 2004-04-19 . chapter 2
This is cute. I love softball and baseball, but I especially love seeing Ecklie get his butt kicked. Keep up the great work and update soon.
TheSonicDremel 2004-04-17 . chapter 2
BWAHA! By bro plays softball, and is pretty good... This is pretty funny! ME likey!
Sweet Jorja 2004-04-17 . chapter 2
Oh my God!! that was SO awsome! I especially like the little part with the dead ball. LOL That DOES sound like something Catheirne and Nick would want to do(based on past experiences)hehe. WRITE MORE!
Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2004-04-17 . chapter 2
the loss is just the beginning?
...fabulous...
Nikkd03 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
isn't it usually 7 run rule? Or at least it was when I played. and it has only been a year since I stopped.
East-Wing-Witch 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
Don't just leave it there! That's cruel, especially when you've gotten me interested...
Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
yay for softball.
Sweet Preserves 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
heh heh this is cool:-) I know nothing about softball or baseball, but I'm liking this, it's funny, cute, and you've really got the characters! I know Nick would deffinitly be swearing like that if it wasn't a primetime TV show:-D Keep it up!!
Peace:-)
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