that was a LONG chapter! congrats, i honestly thougt you abandoned this story completley but i guess i was wrong! i'm happy you continued because i think this fic is awesome. awesome awesome awesome! looks like inu is finally warming up to michelle, ABOUT TIME! shippo is so stupid, Quote on:

“A sudden change of the wind...

this is the longest self-insertion i've ever read, and it's the best one too. i like this story alot its awesome! michelle is cool too and thats my middle name! michelle michelle michelle! ya, inu is a complete JERK! whats his problem any way? i cant beleive she and Koga beat each other up! that'd be pricless to see, koga beat up by a girl, GIRL POWER! well keep it up! love the story, plz continue
ciao

sesshygirl

p.s. don't stop writing this story! PLZ it's so on my favs!

great job so far i like self insertions. keep it up!

wow. i read this whole story (all 11 chapters of it so far) in a hour or so. I rule! heh. good ficcy so far Michelle-chan!

:shock: huge chapter...well, not BIG huge, but huge, if ya know what i mean

woah...

damn that sucks majorly...poor Sasue

oh my god...THAT'S SO AWESOME! GROUP FIGHT!

woah. Inu's being a little **, ain't he? poor you Chelle.

wow, that's awesome. BEAT THAT SCRAWNY WOLF'S ** MICHELLE-CHAN!

a broken soul...that's gotta suck...*huggles michelle*

o suspenceful!

oo goodness. i see hatred, yet gentle love growing here...heehee

well then. seems like you're having a bunch of trouble over there, ne Michelle-chan?

i luv it1 update soon girl