wah...wala akong masabi...hogwarts in the philippines, f4 na naging bof na ngayon...?

Actually, Taglish ito, ha. Medyo nakakailang basahin, palibhasa hindi karamihan yung mga Tagalog fanfics dito. *kamot ulo* Para siyang tinagalog na Koreanovela. Maganda naman, kaso, kapag tinagalog mo yung isang kuwento, sana ayusin mo yung pagkakabuo ng mga pangungusap. May maling pagkakabaybay.

Wow, may cellphone na sila! Hindi lang yon, parang nakakahawig nito yung mga buhay sa Pilipinas ngayon. (Friendster! DepEd!)

Sorry for being a sadistic critique, but, I'd have to say that it was pretty uncomfortable reading your fic. I'm a Filipino, pure and all. Just can't grasp what you're trying to write. I'd have to agree with one of your reviewers, yeah, you've really got to spellcheck this one. You've even got the Filipino words wrong ('cya'?)and you said that they were in the Philippines, how would Hogsmeade be there? Yeah, I understand they have magic, and you've got such an imaginative mind, but it's kind of senseless. I know that this is fanfiction and I've no right to tell you to bin this story, but have you really put any effort in this? Consider how people would react with this kind of story, don't just think of your enjoyment but also of your reputation. Do you really want to hear that Filipinos are bad in English, even their own language? Seriously! And so you know, it didn't take much time in writing this review.

You should really get a beta or at least check your grammar and spelling before you post something.

Wow, her lips is so soft… (She only has one lip? Don't you mean "are soft"?)

Suddenly, Cedric’s smile broadened. But Harry and Cho did not noticed it. (Noticed? It should be "notice".)

I had a hard time understanding the fic, but I got the basic idea. Although the plot seems a bit senseless, I have to admit that it's quite funny at parts.

Kaloka naman tong tagalog-fic! Uy... bilisan mo sa pagsusulat dahil impatient akong tao.

JOKE!
pero sana lang... ~_^
wang mong bibitinin ang fans mo kay?

nakakabaliw ung story mo! tawa ako ng tawa! natatakot na nga ung mga tao sa computer shop kasi nakakita sila ng luka luka! kung masasabi ko lang na dahil yun sa story mo eh! ginawa ko na!

uggh!!. ang hirap basahin.. hindi kasi ako sanay magbasa ng tagalog na fics.. tagal ko nga magsulat ng review na ito kase iniisip pa kung paano ko isulat sa tagalog to.. 'di ko rin kase natapos ang studies ko sa tagalog..
pero, nakakatawa ang estorya na ito... i mean seeing that the characters are speaking tagalog... hehe .. i cud juz imagine all of them being filipinos speaking with an accent when they say sumthin in english.. lol
it's gud to see kapwa kababayan na nagsusulat... mawrharhar!! ok, 'ala na ako masabi...

ahh.. hindi na ako magbasa nito.. hindi ako boto sa harry/cho...
matolerate ko... pero ayaw..

Hindi ko pa po ito nababasa ng buong-buo pero nakakatawa talaga yung pagtatagalog nila. Isipin niyo iyun. Ako, naiisip ko yung dubbing sa mga Koreanovelas. Haha! =)

hindi ko pa nababasa ng buo pero natatawa na agad ako. hehe

OMG! This is funny! Just picturing the characters speaking Tagalog. Haha. Fun read. Nice job. =)

haha! nakakatawa naman to! taglish pa! meron pa silang araling panlipunan para hindi mag abroad si snape! haha! keep it up! :)

Hayup! ito ang kauna-unahang fanfic na tagalog na nabasa ko. ok to ah..nakakatuwa! sana ipagpatuloy mo pa ang pagsusulat nito. astig talagang mabasa ang isang fanfic na nakasulat sa sariling wiaka natin.

tang na! *pardon my cussing* haha... this is the shiznit! haha!

Astig! Hahahahahahaha! LOL! Tapos may pagka-"taglish", ha? Eto ung first filipino HP fanfic ko! D naman ako fan sa F4 pero ang cute clang apat! Suggestion lang, use Malfoy's first name (Draco) kung close tlaga cla (sori, nka-"chat" mode ako, eh...).

Update soon!

hala! ano ba yan! hyper ka cguro nung sinulat mo toh... harhar... kakatawa, pramis... pero anti-F4 ako eh.. pero... ok lang... ewan... haha... malabo na ung pinagsasasabi ko dito, end ko na nga tong review!