dark precipice 2008-01-02 . chapter 1Whoa! Great! Especially the ending! |
Hannah 2007-03-12 . chapter 1 One of the best!
: ) |
Atsuatsu 2006-06-28 . chapter 1Cute little dribble-drabble. You should tey and write a longer Nejihina fic.! This couple grew on me WAY to much WAY to quickly, so need more stories! Please write! |
Tingmeow 2006-02-25 . chapter 1Hey, although it's really short, it's damn good. Please write more! :D I want to read MORE MORE MORE MORE !! |
Peliqua 2005-08-09 . chapter 1Blegh, NejiHina makes me cringe. x_x Its a really cool little drabble, I like it. So I'll put aside my loathing for the pairing and tell you its an awesome drabble. It really is. xD;
-pretends its nejiten-
-shifty eyes- xD; |
Gaahina chan 2005-02-12 . chapter 1 Direct and striker. I love it. XD It's very good. You should make more NejiHina. I love them. |
Curryfish 2004-07-19 . chapter 1Short, decisive, and striking. I loved it. :) I only wished it could have been longer...but I suppose that would spoil the 'decisive' tone of it, mm? |
purplemachine 2004-06-12 . chapter 1Lovely drabble, I liked it lots. And I swear I read this somewhere before--maybe at Eight Birds on LJ? Either way, I liked this so much, I decided to review. Additional chapters aren't necessary, I don't think, as the simplicity in itself is beautiful. :3 |
paddy's-tsunami 2004-04-18 . chapter 1*blink*
Hey, what was that? I'm experiencing the whole carrot/stick scenario, when someone dangles a goody in front of your nose only to pull it away before a nibble, you know?
What I did read was a delightful blend of angst and bittersweetness. Kinda like dark chocolate...
This is so chock full of potential, are you planning on continuing or perhaps writing a longer Neji/Hinata fic? I'm not usually a fan of that pairing, but the relationship between those two is intriguing. And I have yet to see a fic that fully explores the dynamics between them. Hope you continue this, I'll be checking to see if ya do! |
Nora D 2004-04-17 . chapter 1 Nice, very nice drabble. I love it. |
what you see 2004-04-16 . chapter 1 Stupid Neji. He should just do it. XD Or maybe not, but I liked your story anyway. You should write some more Neji/Hinata stories. (Preferably with happy endings). |
nancy 2004-04-16 . chapter 1 that was well written in only five minutes, i could of never done that. lol anyway, is this a one-shot? e-mail at LittleAznAngel60@aol.com and let me know, o yea its a zero atfter the six |
Kichou 2004-04-16 . chapter 1That was hot! Why not make a whole long fic about Hinata/Neji? Please make more fics with these couples. I totally love them. |
noname 2004-04-16 . chapter 1 simple and sweet |