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| jasonc65 2005-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseWell done! It shows that Satan pays his workers well. |
| Hahukum Konn 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Nice twist at the end, too. ;) |
| Child of Immanuel 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuse**sobs** Great description of his mental processes, though! Love in Christ |
| fairyofwallpaper 2004-08-19 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Very good. Very, very good. I loved how you told it from Charrington's POV, the twisted love for Big Brother and his obsession. Sad ending, though, I actually found myself regretting his death... |
| TriscuitTheFlyingSnkCracker 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseExellent! And a sticky end for Mr. Charrington too! What more could one ask for? |
| PrimRose 2004-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWOW! All I can say! You really deserved that A! This story is so relevant it could have easily been added as an epilogue to 1984! You are incredible! I LOVED it! |
| Toboe LoneWolf 2004-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAh, a classic. Mucho impressed w/ your school, 1984 is on our senior reading list. (O.o Tells a lot about the reading level of my school.) ^^ But I read it anyway. Kinda depressing in the end, but hey, that was the point. A point nicely pressed in this fic. ^.~ You really did get in his head. Sheesh, now /he's/ a brainwashed soul. I mean, how many times did he say he loved Big Brother? Man, and this was before the age of computer networking. I really liked that part that had Mr. Charrington repeat Big Brother's name over and over to (of all things) regain his sanity. O.o Hey, did anyone try doing a POV from Big Brother? Now that'd be wierd. Probably a popular choice, though. But this choice of character was a nice one; one that most people forget. Never thought you could do so much with such a seemingly minor character. (Thought: I should probably go and reread the book, but it kind of gave me the willies...) Yea, expanding your horizons. Funfun and goodgood. (...O.o...) NR okay by now? ST? Something else? *shrugs* Ah well, off to study. Tests be evil. Ja ne! |
| Rayny 2004-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice. I especially like the ending - couldnt have happened in a different way. Although I think he thinks and talks to complicated for a devoted member of the thoughtpolice, but if he didnt there wouldnt be a story. Ah well. |
| Ebony Kuroneko 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWell...that was disturbing...you just reminded me why I hate that book so much. Not because it's not well written, but because it's TOO well written and it disturbs me...I have no doubt that if Nozomi had stayed in power, something like 1984 would have started to happen to Japan with Nozomi as Big Brother. *Cringes at the thought...yet is intrigued**Runs around in circles* It's not loff! Not loff, I say! |
| sunny-historian 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! That's fabulous -- very chilling. Perfectly congruous... excellent. |