Definitely has possibilities, although I have seen something similar before, even down to the kiss in the library.

not bad...despite wat ppl may say i like da build up and the anticipation. Keep writing

This is really good, please update soon!

i want... i want you.
its a classic! woohoo! this was great! update soon onegai! *^^* ta!

Oh, that's just TOO weird. Um, I'm not a homophobe but...ugh! Draco and Harry!? No! That's sick and twisted! They're enemies! Try Draco and Neville, hahaha. Yes, this story is sick, but oddly interesting. Good writing.

Hee hee. He wants him. Babay. say that word in your next chapter. Babay.

this is CRAZY! its messing with my head! i can't figure out if i likt it or not. i know, i'll just pretend Malfoy is a hot girl, and then it all makes sense.
cool.
Billyx x.

R Harry you **!! Come on come on make with the hotness! Not that Harry is hot... and they're both kids... but meh!

FOUND IT!! and i was right about you!!

yay another chapter, cant wait to see draco's reaction

woo i found it! i can't seem to find the 3rd chapter though so i is dismile and such forth but enough this chapter is good enough to keep me happy for a while but i still think you is just trying to corrupt the innocense that is harry potter.

Yay! No mashing! God, that made feel sicky. If this is what I'm like now, imagine what's gonna happen when you get to the lots of sex.
I would so much apprecaite if you didn't use that word again...ew...

ooh, intrigue and mystery! i like. update soon please!

aw poor harry
loved it more please

Bah, why are you clogging up the smut with character-building and plot? BAH! BAH BAH BAH! You're just lucky you're a decent writer or I would not be so happy...