LMFAO! I figured that you don't like him very much. but i can totally read a fic that's against someone i love. this was hilarious. People get offended. I don't think it's right they know perfectly well that it's an anti then they get all pissed off. I make fun of MYSELF. I'm a good sport. that was GREAT!

Hehehe... Maybe you don't like Cloud, but I love him. No, Cloud was never very bright and he was more than mildly insane, but that made him all the more entertaining. Great read! :)

Awesome fic! Very funny.

Should have had at least a little scene with Tifa complaining about not getting the room with Cloud.

One word: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I am not really interested in Aeris/Cloud pairing but I love this... it's funny An innocent Cloud and a not so innocent Aeris... besides saving the world, Miss Lockheart has something more to worried about...Wahaha

Nice... really, very nice. Not really a true "humour" story, but that was only because of Aerith's somewhat cynical attitude. OOC, yes, but my stories are OOC as well. That's what you get when you write fanfiction, ne? I didn't really see "Cloud-bashing" going on like other people did. I just saw Aerith thinking about him, and let's face it, that's how Cloud acts. I think the boy's gay. Come on now, who could resist Tifa *or* Aerith? @_@ Hell, even I couldn't after a while. And poor Vincent had to share a room with Yuffie? Nanaki is tolerable (so kawaii), but *Yuffie*... blech. I liked the little banana comment Cloudy-baby made. Cute. Very much so. I can picture Cloud as this naive, virginal childe, I really can. It seems very much like him. I can also see Aerith getting slightly bitter as her role as the happy-sweet-girl; I sure as hell know I would! Anyway, this review is getting very long for a short story that was just listed under humor-I think you just may have recieved the longest review I've ever given. Not the longest in history, but... I digress. I'll leave you to your perfectly wondeful fiction. I do believe I shall read more.

Cute! )

O.o. Aeris was impossibly annoying in this ficcy, esecially when she talked to Virgin-Boy e.e

O_o Cloud's acting pritty damn weird and Aeris is totally OOC.

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despite the fact that im a cloud fan, this was quite amusing..i like it!

aww! cloud-bashing aside, that was really funny!

This was so hilarious! Aeris swearing? Ha! I really like this! I was laughing so hard! Keep those funny stories in!

I must agree with Mel ...

Anyways, You know I liked it, I like all your stories