I loved it. I hope you are going to continue.

Beautiful as always...Reflective pieces like this that are well written are always pretty, yours give me shivers. ^^

i see here that it has been a while since you updated last. i hope you decide to finish it. it is a very interesting story. i guess one would began to wonder what happens to an assassin once they lose their edge. you should let yohji confront his friends and make them tell him the truth. i don't just mean bombay but ken and aya also. it seems to me that they are putting yohji's life as well as their own in danger by not telling yohji that he is becoming a liability. but that's just me. please think about finishing this story because it looks to be a good story.

*dies* Such a good fic...really. It's one of the few stories I love to sit back and watch like a show instead of wanting to jump in. =3 ...I especially loved the part of Yohji debating the sweatpants. Made me laugh like crazy.

Oh that must have been interesting when Bradley showed up for one of their nights with a gun. And I get the impression that Schu is just barely making ends meet these days.

Family and friends not liking who your dating can be hell on a relationship... ~sigh~ In this case it could be really hell. No wonder these two have so much trouble trying to stay together.

Schu should just give it up and hold him for the night. Yohji is so lost in the space in his head that really doesn't know what he wants. Or more importantly 'what he can have'.

Hm you know this makes me want to ask how old is Yohji here? How long has it been since the citadel? Neither he nor Schu is that old. Maybe they could form a detective agency together? Well except that technically Yohji is dead. But they could come up with a way to start over.

LOL you know I love the fact that you draw them out the anticipation drives me nuts but they are oh so worth it. And if they end then they are all done and there isn't anymore. ,-_-,

I know we talked about October via email when you first put it up last year because we doing the uber Gundam Seed chatter at the same time. LOL So I never got over here to leave a review. I'm reading it again before I read Fallen so review time has come!

I can so see that Schu out there on the dance floor just going to the beat and not caring at about who is around him or what they are doing. Actually enjoying the contact. hehehe You know where I got that image of him though don't you? LOL

I feel for Yohji and Schu. Even after 4 full years of not smoking, I still get cravings especially when I'm stressed or upset. I know I should be saying poor Schu here and I do. I feel sorry for Yohji though, he's always doing this to himself. He's always the wishy washy one and Schu is always the one that knows right what he wants. Maybe it's being a telepath.

Hehehe Bradley get to be the jerk again eh? Which is Schu more upset about that Brad left to start the "New World Order" over again which will take forever and didn't take him. Or because he didn't just give up on that and continue to build on what they had already established in Japan?

LOL Yohji has a point. Schu has an unfair advantage and worse doesn't share. I'm Schu made the first moves, but it helps being the telepath sometimes, because you know when the other person really wants something and is too scared to ask.

hehehehe You are still the Queen of songfics!! BTW I think you're a mind reader. LOL How else would you know I planned to spend most of this weekend reading and looking for good fic? Have you ever considered Get Backers Fic?

An interesting sad/happy reunion. I like the way you revealed the past only gradually, by having the characters refer to it in their conversation, rather than reveal the whole of it in the first paragraph. I'm somewhat shamed to admit that I thought that perhaps Crawford threw Schuldich out because he *knew* the german would be happier without him and with Yohji. -_-; Sorry for that. An enjoyable and very realistic read.

Beautiful! A great look on a random (or is it so random?) Meeting, with two over used souls together sharing smokes. Words flowed together, rather nicely, and maybe just a bit sharply as well. I liked how hollow, but full the ending was. There was no real climax, but for a look inside's someone's mind, you need no climax. This was jsut a conversation between friends. A beautifully dark thoughts thrown together. I really enjoyed this!

I was scared by the anger, depression and lostness and other negative feelings in the tones of Schuldich and Youji.
This really wrenches my heart. At some point in the fic,.. it went numb and I thought I was dead. Brad left, Nagi hurting too, life going down hill...
Yes, I agree. This is a new begining. No more Schwartz, no more Estet but a light at the end of the tunnel. You're the best Yanagi-sen.
(Kitty ears twitching) This going to be a long story? Perhaps like Rozenhell? (I'm reading it and *can't* stop! Help! I LOVE it!)

Very nice, perfect for the mood I was tonight.
*chuckles* I know what is like to be weasled into a writing by flattering friends ^-^
Take care.
P.S. Would you mind if I put this on my website? *puppy eyes*