 Rmorletd 2004-04-16 . chapter 1 That was really funny.
There aren't any real DNA²/Ranma 1/2 crossovers out there, and your story makes me wish it was longer, more than a spamfic.
But then again, it may be better if it stays that way. Afterwards, it would be too easy to fall into the original DNA² storyline.
Let the readers, or you, decide of this story's fate.
If it does continue, would you mind telling me?
On a more academic ground, you grammar seems pretty good, and either you don't need to spellcheck, or you're doing it very well. Either way, it's real nice to read. |