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Only Human 2005-06-04 . chapter 11
Wow, I haven't read fanfiction in ages. Guess it's time to get back on the bandwagon. I really like your characterization of Katie. I would like to see it go further, and now that Jubilee knows somewhat what is going on, it could get interesting. Anyway, hurry up and update all ready. I want to see what happens next.
ONly HUman 2004-05-17 . chapter 11
So exciting. I'm so glad you had a completely Katie chapter, and that Jubilee found something out. I smell a confrontation coming. This is magnificent. Keep it up, this is getting so interesting.
Joseph Rosario 2004-05-16 . chapter 11
Great story there man,Weard as hell but its good like that weard as hell good.
Write more!!
Pendragon4 2004-05-16 . chapter 11
This is wonderful, remnants! I am really enjoying this fic! That's alright that it took so long.. you gave us a pretty lengthy chapter in place of that! lol Very Very nice! Cannot wait for more!
Kristina 2004-05-12 . chapter 10
A new chapter! An interesting one too. You keep bringing in characters and sub plots, a sure way to keep our interest up. I can't see where you'll go with this. Nicely written, as always, except for one or two typos. Keep up the good work!
ONly HUman 2004-05-11 . chapter 10
wow, this is so good. What I want to know, is when Xavier is going to pay for his crimes, or even realize that he is wrong. *sigh* he has a mental disorder or some sort.
Anyway, I'd like to see more student interaction with Katie, the story for the past few chapters has dealt centrally(sp?) with Xavier, but Katie is the protagonist. I'd like to see how she plays a part in all this.
I'm sure you're getting to that part, but I'm impatient. lol
Update soon.
Pendragon4 2004-05-11 . chapter 10
Very nice Remants! This chapter is very interesting. I really enjoy this story. Come to think of it, I really enjoy all of your stories. Your writing is amazing! Oh, btw, I reposted Four Sided Triangle(my first fic). Just to let you know. Anyway, nice job!
Only Human 2004-05-09 . chapter 9
No, this wasn't boring at all. Different, but not boring. I love the way you gave me an indepth look into the twisted, pyschotic mind that is Xavier. He is so determined that he refuses to see Neil as a person, a human being, an individual, a soul, etc. To Xavier, Neil is just a human, a means to an end.
I didn't realize how many anomolies you had. And so many deaths. Were any of the deaths related to Xavier's mass killing-perhaps a delayed effect? Or were they mostly hate crimes? And if hate crimes? Why-they pose no real threat-there are so few of them, and they have no real power? Also, what is the connection between the anomolies? Why did they survive? Is there even a connection?
On a side note, I liked your portrayal of the new US government. Very interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Only Human 2004-05-09 . chapter 8
That little weasel! I knew Xavier was up to no good. Great chapter. Thanks for making it longer. Love your portrayal of Scott and Logan for that matter.
Kristina Johansson 2004-05-07 . chapter 9
Hello! I read this story a while back and then just yesterday I saw that you had revised and written more. I was thrilled! I read all of it last night and it's very interesting, intriguing and well-written.
Great characters although I don't think the majority of the mutant population are so hateful towards humans they'd persecute them. Xavier is described perfectly, a man that becomes ruthless because he is certain he is doing the right thing.
Neil was released this morning so he could continue participating in the study. His mannerisms seem to have been largely altered, which is curious.
This makes me wonder! What exactly did Hank do to Neil? Anyway, great story! I am on the edge of my seat!
Pendragon4 2004-05-06 . chapter 9
lol. Yeah.. wrote the first chapter the other weekend.. probably write another this weekend when I get the time. I still love this fic, remnants! You show a side of Xavier no one really sees. Hm... to where I think it's going... honestly have no idea! lol. Maybe Katie really seeing things clearly about Xavier.. It'll be interesting. Keep going!
Leen713 2004-05-05 . chapter 9
Very interesting chapter (not boring :-)
Makes me wonder though what Magneto et al are up to tho since they're not part of the government...hmm...
Will be watching for next update!
Guin 2004-05-05 . chapter 8
I've been thinking about the whole 'masscring the whole world thing' and the trick is, Prof. X probabally DID. he caused the entire world and intense, crippling pian for about half a minute right? Imangine all the car-crashes, the air-planes that collided, the people falling off buildings, babies dropped on their heads. Millions of people must have been kiled! I heard theres gonna be a X-men 3. I wonder if they will confront that there.
Good work keep it up!
Guin 2004-05-05 . chapter 7
How can the invasion of Spain not really make any sense to her?! -rolls eyes- airhead.
Anywho, I'm gonna read the next chapter in a min, so I'll speak to you then. hee hee
Pendragon4 2004-05-03 . chapter 8
This is still good remnants! Too lazy to login lol. I'm rewriting Four Sided Triangle so I can make a better plot. Just some news from me lol. I love this... am I thinking what you're thinking w/ Neil and everything like that?? yeah... lol don't know where you're goin w/ that, but of course I'll still read it lol! Keep it up!
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