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IkariPanda
2008-07-02 . chapter 1
HEY! Did you get my PM?If you did I'm waiting 4 a response.If you did send me a response...I don't know how to open it ;_;! Just review any of ficcies to let me know what's going on.Then I'll review you back...blah,blah,blah...with review tag.(like phone tag...) Anyways... Talk to you later!!
Razzkat
2008-06-14 . chapter 16
Eternal Smasher!! You live! A really most excellent chapter. The action was awesome, and I really can't decide which fight was my favorite...I think I'll have to go with Jigglypuff vs. Mewtwo, though, because Jigglypuff got to show her stuff--go Jigs! I loved the Kirby vs. Dyna Blade one, too, and the other spirit battles were very intense. Great work. I'm sorry I took so long to review (I've been really slow lately D:), and I hope more people review this chapter, but please, update again soon, if you can! I want to see the end of this. I think you can deliver the epicnessosity, too. XD
Lacto3.1415
2008-06-10 . chapter 16
Now THAT was an excellent chapter :) (chapter 15 was cool too, but dude, you can't beat EXTREME battle action).

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President: I veto this bill making Sukama get into a battle with Violet.

*now to the people of Senate and House*

Sukama's Head: I vote to NOT overrule that veto.

Sukama's Fist: I vote to overrule that veto.

Sukama's Heart: I vote to overrule that veto.

Random dude: Alright, the veto is overruled and the bill becomes law - Sukama must fight Violet.

Sukama's Head: Aw, man!

Sukama's Fist and Heart: 2/3 vote rules. So, ha.

(That was dumb...yay!)

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Anyways...

I just realized I still don't get what you mean when you said "It's from the show." Heh heh.

Anyways...

Poor Mewtwo. I would suck to have someone take over your body without your consent (or maybe he's the evil one all along, oh).

Anyways...

Yet again, great story!

Update soon!
Canada Cowboy
2007-09-09 . chapter 15
And the action begins. That was pretty good, considering that Jigglypuff has come full cycle (from reluctant hero to total responsibility of the world in her hands). I can't wait to see the final fight, and who's behind all of this.

Hope you update soon!
ri2
2007-08-20 . chapter 15
And so it begins. The end of it all...
Cool!
Razzkat
2007-08-20 . chapter 15
It's been a while since I read this one! But I guess it's going to be over soon, huh? ;.; *sniffs* Really good chapter; I really liked the descriptions of the nature, especially. I look forward to part two...
Lacto3.1415
2007-04-27 . chapter 14
Sweet, the final spirit! *turns out it's an ancient stick rabbit that can only exist in flat zone* Yippee for the ancient stick rabbit that can only exist in flat zone!

Mr. Game and Watch: Yay for flat zone!

Sukama: Yay for the ancient stick rabbit!

Jigglypuff: Yay for all this to finally be over soon!

Update soon!
The Devil Deity
2007-03-14 . chapter 14
Lol great cliffy. Jigglypuff is useful for summat after all.
Canada Cowboy
2007-02-27 . chapter 14
Very good! I really liked how Jigglypuff's character is portrayed throughout the fic. She started off as a weak Smasher, then a reluctant hero, then finally progressing into a confident Spirit Hunter. And I really liked how Kirby was there to help her out whenevr she needed it. Real nice!

You're doing a kick-ass job so far, there's really nothing in the fic that I see as a major or glaring weakness. Keep on writing, you have the potential to be a great writer!
Razzkat
2007-02-25 . chapter 14
NU SUSPENSE!! That was a very intense chapter. Please update this story more? I think it's very original and interesting.
Lacto3.1415
2006-07-09 . chapter 13
LOL! Short Circuit!

Lightning is so cool...because it's bright...and shocking...

The last battle will be in two parts!? That will be long...sweet...

Well, update soon!
Silver Ripper
2006-07-09 . chapter 13
Cool chapter, and one of my favorite fight scenes. Too short though, in my opinion. Keep up the good work! (god I sound like my teacher)
RoyalFanatic
2006-07-09 . chapter 13
I'm guessing Mewtwo's got a good idea of Jiggly's job...will the others find out too?
Meh, probably just me. XD
So uh...short, but still, a chapter.
Update!^_^
falcored
2006-07-08 . chapter 4
Okay so by concentrating she activates the hat's power, and get the power she needs the most? Was look inside supposed to mean literaly like look inside Kraid isn't inside the tornado. I pretty sure the story is getting better. Good job.
falcored
2006-07-08 . chapter 3
I think it was longer. I have a question. Master Hand promised to make Chisakimaku a spirit? Did she want to be a spirit, and why would he just make any ol person a powerful spirit? A little better than the last chapter.
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