I'm liking this story so far. Love the idea. Oh my god the whole Mort dirty with yucky stuff was disgusting...i'm going to puke. Even thinking about it. Even if it wasn't mort I'd still feel sick. My mom works at a mental hospital so she has to deal with this kind of stuff. So the hospital thing seems legit and not made up. Good job.

Neon Daisies, I cannot begin to thank you enough for writing such a brilliant story. It has kept me interested and pratically glued to the computer for two days now, and I believe that my family is starting to miss me. Still, the perspective you brought to Secret Window was dazzling and your characterization of the both the cannons and O.C. was a thing of beauty. I had to keep reminding myself throghout the story that it was a dark fic, amongst the humor of your writing. The ending didn't come off as too dry at all, although I'll admit that I wasn't overly sad about its conclusion. Overall, I would just like to say that that I greatly enjoyed your fanfic. Neon Daisies, I salute you.

This was very good; I'm sorry that Mort died, but at least he's peaceful now! that was very sad though; you even made me cry!

this was wonderful! thank you so much for writing it.

ta,

Poppy

It was Ted? holy **! he was a bastard but I never thought he was the one doing it! holy ** you are good at this mystery stuff. Totally turned my head around!

Carly and Mick siTting in a tree...K-I-S-S-I-N-G!

UGH! I am so hatting TED at this moment!

This chapter was good by the way; I've never been so interested in secondary characters and OC's before and I thank you for making Carly so real!

I wish that I had gotten to the end of this chapter last night but my bloody computer was being ANNOYING!

Anyway, I LOVED THIS!

Ted is such a bastard! kill him! *lol*

I like Mort's thoughts here; it's interesting to see him like this. This plot is so different and I think this is one hell of a brilliant fic!

You are bloody brilliant!

ta,

Poppy

Does Mort even sleep? has he gone so long because of his trama?

*huggles Mort!* poor baby! let me get you some hot chocolate, that'd make my baby Morty feel better!

Oh, this was positivley brilliant! I am of the mind that it can't be Mort. IN fact, I'm suspecting that Gardner dude...whatever his name is!

er --

gotta go,

ta,

Poppy

THis was very interesting; however, I now have to get ready for work. I must say that you are doing a great job with the Mort's character even though he doesn't talk. I think you should try some original work. if you haven't all ready.

Your writting style is very inovative and interesting.

ta,

Poppy

Love the ending! I wonder what Carly is going to think of the writing on the wall!

Poor Morty! I just want to huggle him! *sniff*

I'm totally liking this!