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Reviews For: Deliver Me
Crow 2007-07-19 . chapter 1
THAT WAS AWSOME! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! Luv Crow
silverwolf92 2004-08-15 . chapter 1
this is really good. i like how it flashes through vivian's memories. i have read other B&C fics, but this is one of the best.
NightStalkerSDX 2004-07-11 . chapter 1
I liked it i had to download the song to get where you are coming from I really like the song though. lol ^.^ well keep writting i liked it.
Litha-23 2004-06-10 . chapter 1
that was very good. cooly
Kaze 2004-06-05 . chapter 1
really good I like it...write more stuff like it
DarkAngelB 2004-05-29 . chapter 1
That was good! You really pulled me into the story with this songfic I hope you write more stories similar to it.
yaukira 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
great! but that was a lot like what the book said already
Scritch 2004-04-17 . chapter 1
Thank you for reviewing my story - I decided to answer you back! This was very well done, and I much enjoyed the angst in it, though it seemed a little shaky, more like you were writing and seeing the words but not really feeling them. This is just my interpretation at this moment, and I'm horribly tired, so perhaps thats just me and you were putting everything into it. In any case, if you really wanted to make this look better as well, I would suggest that you change the formatting. Put the song lyrics into italics, with maybe an extra blank line before and after the verses, so as to show more gap and therefore time difference. Just a suggestion. I quite enjoyed this!
inuyasha92689 2004-04-17 . chapter 1
Hey i love it was really great thanks for the story tootles
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