Lady of Castillo 2006-04-22 . chapter 1I loved your story it was so cute! i just love peeps I bought a crap load yesterday as they were on SALE! Who can beat 15 peeps for $1. I loved the line where Dee said he could eat 100 peeps! I have eaten 50 and nearly died.
Cheers! |
greenmeat 2005-11-28 . chapter 1 I like this sentence: “If I weighed a couple hundred pounds or so more, you couldn’t escape next time I got you pinned...”
Really great!! hehe. I thought it was great. Imagine what Dee would do to Ryo if he had a serious case of sugar rush. hehe, I'm squirming with anticipation. :) |
Tara 2005-02-06 . chapter 1 OMG! I love FAKE! I didnt think anyone else read it but me O_O write more FAKE fics please! |
Juliet Rose 2004-09-09 . chapter 1aww that was really cute and it stayed in character. Plus i love Peeps so kudo's to you. |
Jeannette VonQuestenberg 2004-08-14 . chapter 1(Chokes as she falls over laughing) Dear God, woman, this is funny. You are female, right? Oh, yeah- "Dragon Mistress" would imply that you are. Dense, dense. Anyways, this is funny as heck. Only problem is, if they're not together, why would Ryo call Dee 'love'? Besides that, great. |
Akumarayne 2004-08-13 . chapter 1That was fantastic! I luved it! Pretty cute to, the end was great and I liked the uber yummy part. Good job! |
KodawaruOnna 2004-08-03 . chapter 1Good job, the story was really great... Gotta go eat some peeps... *evil grin* |
B 2004-06-27 . chapter 1 Hee, that was great! Amazing what those peeps can do to you, huh? Hooray for FAKE and gooey easter candy! Yay! Good story, I liked it ^_^ |
ObiOtaku16 2004-06-24 . chapter 1ahahahahaha! I'll never look at marshmellow peeps again! ^^ And they used to be my favorite eater candy too. |
Sparrow319 2004-05-23 . chapter 1cute! |
tkmaxwell777 2004-05-12 . chapter 1 I read your other fic 'Aishiteru' and then came across this one. They were both really cute and sweet and sappy... *sighs* Loved 'em! My only complaint is that they weren't long enough *lol* Seriously though, I think you captured the characters very well... except for Ryo cursing (I don't think he did in the manga, even though Dee and Bikky did, but I could be wrong), they all seemed very IC. All in all, the dialogue was excellent, and I really enjoyed reading it. Funny thing is... I have Peeps right by my bed from Easter that I've been working my way through *giggles* Yep! I tore open a pack when I started reading this! Uber-yummy ^_^ Thanks for the fun!
TK ^_^ |
HULY 2004-05-01 . chapter 1XD Kawaii! And uber-yummy.
But you know what the strange thing is? Don't kill me, but...
^^;; I totally despise Peeps. *utlra sweatdrop*
I repeat, do not kill me.
Pretty dang good for a first FAKE fanfic. *gives you lots of Peeps* Good job!
Ja ne! |
EreshkigalGirl 2004-04-21 . chapter 1AW! So cute! And you use the word uber! Love it! |
magegirl 2004-04-20 . chapter 1 Squee!! ^.^ I liked, that Peeps are awesome. I like to blow them up in the microwave it is the funniest damn thing I have ever seen, you should try it some time. I thought that Ryo's line at the end was very sweet good job. |
Phineas 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Very nice job, especially for your first fic! It was funny, without trying to be too cute.(I have to admit, the title had me worried) But it had a lot of charm. Your characterization of Dee, in particular struck me as very in character, always on the make, but with a boyishly goofy side. I'm not sold on the WAAH tears flowing anime bit, but that's a pet peeve of mine, I think those things they show in anime, like sweat drops, etc, should be written out in a piece of fiction, like, "So and so blushed with embaressment. " But overall, delightful. Keep writing, I'd like to read more |