No offense, but I didn't really like it. It could've been good, but I thought you made Alaire too perfect, like someone's imagination gone wild, and even arrogant. You also made it seem like Hermione was the evil one, which she is not. I also think Alaire is a little bit of a **. She was seriously flirting, not just playfully, with two guys, and she was doing it in front of each other. And it annoyed me a little that you made it seem like America was better than Britain, and that Americans were completely different from the British. I'm American. I heard of patriotism, but that was overboard.

MARY SUE! ICKY!
*shakes Alaire away* YUCK! you need to fix her. she's too nice, and flirty and i think she's STUPID!

i love all your stories but this was very well written! snaps for you! if you ever get the chance, please read my story, which as of now, is not even posted yet.
Keep on writing your intriguing stories!

lovah of Ron

Thank you for the story! Loved Neville and Alaire.

omg how much do i love that last line! not what i expected but it made me laugh for about 5 mins since it was so great!

It's OVER?
Aww... I'm so incredibly sad. I absolutely loved this story. I'm a fan of OC's... since my story is also centered around one... and Alaire was perfect. I'll be telling people to read this one, you can be sure.
...It was nice, that little note about all the Nevilles of the world? I was one... for so, so long. It's very cool to see him turn out so great in this story.

ohh! ::bouncing up and down:: I just want to screech and melt at the same time!

this is such a lovely story! There is absolutely no way for me to be able to express how much happier i am after reading this. while reading this... oh, just... oh! ^_^

Ahh... from smiles to kisses to everything else.
Totally awesome, I must say.
"Everyone deserves to be loved if they can just accept it." How very true that is.
Thanks for givin' us HP fans somethin' great ta read about our one and only Neville Longbottom. Best wishes in future, and happy writing.
~Chantilly

I have to say, this story really did "tide us over until book 6."

Thank you, I'll be watching out for more stories by you guys. :-D

--bri

ayayayay!good story!

Well that was fun. I love a good battle scene... And I'm impressed by the curse descriptions. And you came up with some of your own too? Very nice. I hate coming up with spells... I've started to import them from Final Fantasty, and stuff like that.

Brilliant chapter! I loved the entire thing, especially the ending.

I'll be waiting for the epilogue!

--Bri

No worries about the computer, mine dies all the time...
That was great. Absolutely great. It's so much fun to be a girl, eh?
I've heard the Snape in a bikini excuse more than once, acutally. Apparently, no one wants to see that...
Don't blame them...
His skin's probably all pasty under those robes...

who hoo! awsome! harahrahr!that ginny, so good at hexes, filch in leather, eww.*shiver*great stuff!~lilly

Those pesky boys, when will they learn? Tsk tsk tsk...
Great chapter, and keep 'em comin', please! Sooner rather than later though, please!
~Tilly