Your story is really good (^_^)I really hope you decide to update again. it's one of the best fics I have read until now.
Please, please update again. (._.) Please?

Woot, I really like this one. ^_^; I hope you continue it someday! Nice job.

:O

You're back!

I'm so glad that I decided to check out "Demon's Etc" again, only to be rewarded with an updated fic!

I had read and re-read over the years with the hope that you would continue it. As a result, I remember the fic it was before you made recent revisions. I have to say I really did enjoy the part (now removed) where Chrno reunites for the first time with Magdalena, and I do miss it.

However, I am excited to see where this new updated version (also exciting!) takes us. Your CC fic is absolutely exceptional (it was really what made me return to fanfic ona more permanent basis after a long hiatus) and I know that upcoming chapters will be filled with the same quality and beautiful construction as its predecessors.

If I might make a tiny bit of concrit: Watch where you use your all-caps. In a sentence such as this: "THIS was the life." italics could do the job just fine in providing emhasis and would be more appropriate, formatting-wise.

Can't wait to read more!

Cheers,
Tails, of Sera and Tails

Even if it says (work in progress), are this fic on hiatus? Since, I mean, it's an awesome idea, and I'd love to see more of it.

lol, at first I thought you were going to make Magdalene out to be the bad guy XD I almost stopped reading, but I'm glad I stuck to it, thinking 'How could Magdalene be evil? Maybe Pandemonium is posessing her or something...' And I was right! Hm... looks like you've abandoned it... well, I hope you find the will, determination and creativity cells to continue this! It's such a good fic and it's a shame to see it go to waste...

Yay 100 reviews!

PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON! BTW, I LOVE your story! It's fabulous and Chrono is SO adorable! ^-^

You know, (given that Chrono and Magdelena were alone in the country long enough to have built a cottage with a basement and the fact that they have feelings for eachother) it's surprising she did't get pregnant...
Anyway, please update soon!

oh.. my. i KNEW she was evil! i just KNEW IT! i loved your clarke kent and lois lane approach, it made me giggle. your writing style, though i do adore it, i find can leave action, fighty scenes a little blurry. but, maybe i'm just not paying enough attention. i do love your attention to detail, and emotions.

btw, i heart this story! ^_~ i believe i'm going to go read the parallel to it soon.

Did you die?! I hope you didn't! Coome back! I've just read Chrno 5&6 and remembered your story and am SO SO So sad that you haven't updated!

I hate unfinished business!

PLZ UPDATE SON! or at least if you can't update leave some sort of a message telling us so! SO UNLESS YOU HAVE A GOOD REASON ON BEHALF OF ALL YOUR ANNOYED READERS I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE SOON! plz

UWA! After reading your first fic, I just had to read this one. But WHY oh WHY did you not update?! T_T
You last updated in '04. . . now it is 05! >.<
We are all waiting for you~
Please update soon =P

HEY! PLEASE UPDATE OKAY?!

UPDATE! YOU!YOU! SIE ESEL LOUCHE! SIE HUDIN!

OMG... Why, oh why is this on the LAST page! =@_@=

I'm really enjoying this! Please continue soon!