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whoochopchopchopchpomegranate 5/21/06 . chapter 1
Cho and Ron?

EW!
Ishizu 6/12/01 . chapter 4
loved the chair on the toes LOL! Your writing style is great, I really enjoyed reading so far and had to review NOW since you commanded it ;) Also really appreciate the reviews on my fics, ty muchly
Jama 3/11/01 . chapter 4
WEIRD..continue please
Zo1 3/11/01 . chapter 5
You seem to have posted chapter three several times. Why do you keep posting this fic if you're not adding anything new? I read it three times. I really like it, but I'm getting bored. Continure it... ppppplllleeeeaaaaaassssseeee?
Puzzler 2/25/01 . chapter 4
Insane is right. Dumbledore and Snape? Dean doing Ballet? Dennis throwing up and Angelina kissing George? It's too wierd to be funny. Stick with the Harry/Ron/Cho triangle, that's an interesting idea.
Zo1 2/5/01 . chapter 5
cool, but you seem to have posted some of the chapters twice. I thought it was really funny, and I can't wait to read more
Zo1 1/22/01 . chapter 1
I didn't read the first parts to this story, so it made absolutely no sense to me what so ever. I liked it tho. write more!
METMA Mandy 1/20/01 . chapter 1
EEEP! I AM SOOOOOO SCARED! *grins* hehe. I reviewed last time so you can't hurt me! no no no you can't!
Kim signed review 1/20/01 . chapter 1
Why did they put a sound protecting charm on the room? Whta's up w/ that? What are they doing? I want to know! As do many others I suspect! Please hurry w/ the next part!
brittany 1/20/01 . chapter 1
that was very disturbing. ewwww!
Caitlyn1 1/20/01 . chapter 1
Snape and Dumbledore! Ick! (Dumbledore is like 150 and Snape has to be in his late thirties at least. Ew. That's like kissing your great great grandfather!) Okay, but it's your fic, and you may do what you like! Besides, it's FICTION and anything can happen! :-) Actually, even though I was a bit disgusted with the two kissing, I have to give you points for originality...because I certainly haven't seen this done before! Since you asked for suggestions, I'll give 'em. Don't make the characters use swear words outright. It always seems so OOC to me. I know that Rowling implies in the books that Ron does usually have a few choice words to say about things, but she never writes them out. It always seems very bland to say "No Shit". I dunno...just my opinion, and you don't have to listen to it if you don't want to. Good things about this story...you know how to write good cliffhangers, I am really wondering what the teachers are doing! I was laughing because the scene of them dancing around the cauldron reminded me of the Crucible, or Macbeth's witches. (Double, Double, toil and trouble...fire burn, and cauldron bubble!) I could just see all the students on their brooms crammed around that tiny window! That was pretty funny. Waiting for the next part! :-) Caitlyn
Goblet of Fire 1/20/01 . chapter 1
Dumbledore/Snape ? Yuck. But otherwise it's kind of humourous. You speak French ? Cool, I am French ! Now I'm curious, what is this dancing thing ?
RatheraMutemwiya who isn't signed in par usual 1/20/01 . chapter 1
Ummmm... interesting... but short! Post the next part!
METMA Mandy pretend its signed 1/19/01 . chapter 1
Hmm..maybe they saw...snape, in a dress! maybe he's really a crossdresser! *thinks dreamily* well, feel free to use that one. :)
Styx 1/19/01 . chapter 1
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